CAG is always a captain's billit remember it is not a single squadron that he commands he commands the whole carrier air wing which is made up of multiple squadrons and must be qualified to handle at least two aircraft in the wing also deputy CAG is a captains rank in the Navy so CAG would be the third highest ranking member of the ship and his deputy would be fourth in the command structure

to be perfectly honest, battle stations is correct. also, i like the story so far. you keep my interest. it is going to take me a while to read it all though. at least a week or more. i'll let you know what i think as i move through the story.

Good job so far. keep adding:)

Hello. I've read your stories and you've really got a good one going. My only concern when I read the stories are how rotten person Mac is being and how everyone ignores it and acts like she walks on water. We know she's brilliant, beautfiul, and can be hard, fair, and nice. We know she's a great marine and friend, but she's no better or worse than anyone else. Yet, she's constantly being rude to Harm, not occasionally as with most relationships, but all the time. She's bursts into his cases, saying she's right and its not prejuidicial (which it is), but when he tries to intervene into hers she puts him on the carpet. Anyone, no matter how much they love someone, would only take this type of treatment for only so long before trying to talk about it or exploding over the treatment they receive. As much as I like seeing Mac get attention (heavens knows she deserves it) and Harm being made to follow (ditto), the wife really wouldn't be doing what Mac is doing. She'd be doing what she did in the show, try to talk to him about what she sees is going on and try to help him turn it around - not abuse him.

I enjoy your story, but I feel as though Mac is too domineering. Its as if Harm is totally emasuclated. It seems that his whole life is based on Mac, and that everyone (including his family) are always taking her side, and tell her how she could have done better. I don't think Harm could play second chair to Mac for that long. Other than Harm no longer being MAc's equal I enjoyed your story and how you incorporated all the other characters, especially Jen and Tiner

You make Mac out to be such a ** and have Harm totally in control. She's not like this on the show. Sometimes, maybe, but not constantly. I don't see why Harm married her if she's acting like this. Does she not show any kindness or sense of humor at all?

Okay...could you throw any more stress and problems at Mac? You're stories are good, just a bit unrealistic.

finaly i reach where you left off!!

excellent story! keep up the good work!

LATE must come bak later... -_- z

It's getting late I'll pick up from here later...

here must pick up

pick up from here

pick up from here

continue from here...

At first I thought your story was a bit slow and lacked a bit of loving between Mac and Harm.But as I continued to read I couldn't stop reading it. Enjoyed it very much but is it finished?

Please don't leave me hanging, please finish the story.

Thank you for all the efort it took to write this or any story. Please keep up the good work.

Again thanks, Katie