 Lioness Amythest 2006-12-20 . chapter 1I love it. It's such a realistic account of Peter and Wendy. Yay. |
 Jay FicLover 2006-01-30 . chapter 22Please update soon! I really like this story and it's a bit of a disappointment to see it stay unfinished |
 KageOkami-Kogo 2005-11-25 . chapter 22*Squeals* SO CUTE! Omg lol... I'm such a dork... anywho, please do update! MORE FLUFF! Or else! ^_^ |
 Gina 2005-09-28 . chapter 22 I was browsing through this site and happened upon this wonderful story. I haven't been an adult for to many years but I must say that you have brought back the magic that is Peter Pan and reminded me, it's great to be a kid if just at heart. I would love to see you further this story, Mr. Darling=captain hook? hmm interesting. In whatever way you continue on with this story, just one thing, keep Peter a kid at heart because I think he is just that symbol for all the adults out there. Fantastic job! I've not read any Pan fic's besides this one nor watched the '03 movie, because after all I'm an adult..lol but now I'm off to do just that, watch the movie. This story brought a smile to my face and I thank you for writing it. |
 Teranika Meneldil 2005-09-10 . chapter 22I love this story! I really hope that you will continue to write this story, I'm so curious to find out what is going to happen next? Will Peter tell his parents about his past, what will everyone think of him not that they know, will Wendy and Peter get married? |
 Nomi-clawskull 2005-06-29 . chapter 22wow, well you wrote this forever ago, but i have been so busy with school that I didn't get a chance to review! I like it, it wasn't too cheesy. Perhaps you can continue this story, since it has been six months now...
in the next chapter? consequences for peter's return to neverland and fighting over arranged marriages? |
 mabfairy 2005-06-28 . chapter 22Why did you stop writing?
Did you begin the second part and did it give up?
Please, continue. Their readers are waiting. |
 prieto 2005-04-28 . chapter 1 Please continue your wonderful story.
Peter and Wendy need stay together.
Hugs
Yvonne |
 emma 2005-04-17 . chapter 22 This is such an excellent story! Update soon PLEASE! |
 murphy 2005-04-02 . chapter 22 Wowzers! You are fabulous...simply fabulous.
So discriptive. Aw the kiss. Not cheezy in the slightest bit. It was magnificently written.
Never give up on that dream to become a writer...you are going to be great one day.I just know it. : ) |
 LJthePAIN 2005-03-28 . chapter 22 Oh, I do hope you update soon |
 dakota423 2005-03-28 . chapter 22Oh, 4 god's sake! Update! |
 EmeraldWendy 2005-03-22 . chapter 15omg ur story is good, i enjoyed how they met at the ball and Peter is adopted and now has parents, and a chance that Wendy and Peter might be together. yeah! still reading. |
 EmeraldWendy 2005-03-20 . chapter 1thnaks for u review, and i am now currently reading ur Peter Pan story, so far so good. |
 Kayla Jane 2005-03-11 . chapter 22okay, i really liked all of your story and i can't wait for your next chapter! but when i looked at the date you've last posted on i can tell it's quite some time ago. of course i can understand that becuase, well, of school and all that crap. so i will be waiting on your next chapter no matter how long it takes!
saphiraemrys |