awesome story you got going on :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

why dont u update? it been like... i can't b bothered to count. finkletop.LOL update!

what is he forgetting? jeez! major cliffy...
-k

I can't believe I've never heard of this story before...I read the whole thing, which is so unusual for me. It was amazing.

Well hey! Great story so far. I had just discovered it about a half hour ago and haven't been able to tear myself away since! Although somewhat annoying, I love the way that you are having Lily and James's relationship progress. It really gives the story behind their relationship a whole new perspective. I also would like to applaud you upon your including some details about Voldemorts actions with your story. A lot of people who write Lily and James romance stories conveniently forget to include some of the very important events that are taking place outside of their little fluffy worlds. And despite the fact that I love meeting new characters invented by the author, I absolutely love the way that you've incorporated Dorcas, Alice, and Marleen into the story and given them such colorful, yet believable, personalities.

I have thoroughly enjoyed your story so far, and sincerely hope to see an update soon!

Lindsay

I LOVE this story! You absolutely MUST update it soon! I agree with child-of-scorpio, it is fantastic!! Their fights are really realistic, and hilarious "were not" "was too"! ha, i loved them. I love this! please update!

o this is really interesting and great writing style, i really like it!

Please update - this is such a marvellous story - I couldn't stand it if you didn't finish it!

“What, never?”

“No, never,” she said, smiling.

“What, never?” James repeated.

“Well…hardly ever,” she conceded. He laughed.

Are you quoting from H.M.S. Pinafore, or is it just me?

I LOVE this story, please please update soon, i know you haven't updated in a long time and i hope you have a very good reason, but anyways i hope you haven't abondoned the story, cuz i will be very sad if you did, well update soon!

ur such a spunky panda. never stop writing this story!

This is a totally awesome story,and it rocks =) You should keep it going...

This story is awesome and even though you probably have given up on it, it rocks.

~Ahtnamas

i am in LOVE and i have found my LOVER in this story update soon
indubituley signed,
me

Very good chapter