Am very intrigued! Can't wait for the next chapter! *"eks" in anticipation!* Nice so far... I'm getting sucked into the vortex now! very good. Did I say that already?
Lov beki x x x
btw thanks for reviewing my fic! much appreciated

oh my, this is very very cute! Update soon! :D

Sounds like it has some definite potential. :) I'll keeo an eye out.
The formatting's a little odd, but they writing seems very welld one so far. Good vocab.

hey!! sounds like a good start so far!! I hope that you update soon!! I do love the fairy-tale beginning to the story!! Really romantic'like.

YAY! STORY! WOOT WOOT! Now update.
-Lynay!!

What more can I say? This is very beautifully written! I happy you've published this prologue.

wow that first chapter was really really good i love the way the children act and the mother i cnat wait till the next chapter