Hmm ... interesting, why does she use the name Skywalker? All in all, a good story, although some parts were hard to follow.

A nice story. I love twisted endings, and this one was great! I would like to know more about Ashla's bloodline, assuming that somewhere at the top is Luke and Mara. I liked the idea that the Jedi Council becomes corrupt. All forms of orders or governments become corrupt at some time or another. Look at the history of the Republic. Anyway, I really liked the story.

congrats, suzyq! hey reveiwers- she has about a billion more stories on this line of reasoning with Ashla...e-mail her and she just might put them up! THere's some good ones.. oh yes... like lineage (for about 2-2.5 thousand years, the front and back) and all that other fun stuff. All sorts of history for this future!!! hehehe actually, she may post ALL of them, and then this server would go down! just kidding, she has lots, but not that many. ok, i'll shut up now.

I love this story! it's soo realistic. i'm thinking ashla is two or threee generations down from luke? please post any other stories you have!!!!