If it weren't completely out of character, I'd cry. It's a beautifully developed plot. Just needs a bit of work on structure. I'm too tired to list everything down, but I'll get to that (if you want it) when I wake up again. ^_^

Hey Linay,

I've always been a huge fan of your work and love the stories you write. I never strayed away from the RK fics from your range of work but I'm desperately in love with Escaflowne too. Haha, good first chapter, really sets up for what Hitomi has to experience later on. =DD back to reading!

I don't get what happened. did van and hitomi die?

I absolutely, positively, adored it.

I am having goosebumps.. and I am trying to control this tears... that is so sad... I like it, but I kinda hate it because of the ending.. *cry*

great description, great plot...

That was so sad!

I loved it. This is without a doubt one of the best V/H fics I've ever read. The ending was my favorite part. ^-^

Blast! That was a sad ending! But I think that it was one of the best that I have read so far. You did an excelent job with the story. I think the really sad part was the end of Fanelia because now there is not even a place to remember Van and Hitomi except a distroyed peice of land.

I really did enjoy reading this and the storyline was so original. You did a great job with the characters of the people involved. It was easy to picture what they were going through. Nice work and I hope that you keep up the good work.(Like maybe finish your other escaflowne ff^^)

What an amazing fic...so touching, and wow...I don't know what to say, except it was wonderful.

O_O Not to sound like a rabid fan-girl or anything, but like 'WOW!'

hey, i know that you posted this so long ago. I have read it again and it still has the same impact on me just as the frist time i read it. and if u do check this i have some things to tell u. My friend is wait for a reply from u for such a long time. Here Name is Nikki Couto ( niks_popcorn17@hotmail.com ). I also write fan fics now and it is posted on this site. i wish of u to read it Its Called seperated siblings it is in the escaflowne section. and plz email me at sam_murzek15@hotmail.com Arigato

I have been looking all over fanfiction.net for an amazing Escaflowne chapter story and I know I have found it! This is seriously the best Escaflowne continuation out here! I love everything about the story and the events that happened!! Although...the ending is sad. =( But it fits. Though, I am still kinda confused. But oh well! I'm off to read another story!!! =)

Ok, holding back tears here. This story was Bueatifull and so well writen and planed out. You did a great job, and it makes you think more about the lessons learned with power. So much responsiblity and so much sadness and happiness. Great job. Your story trully is wonderfull. -TigerWolf

::sigh:: okay. esacflowne is such a good story. ancient visions is one of the best continuations. i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

ps: go on and write more of your other fic, endless light. PLEASE.

how COULD you??? How could you end the story this way.... I feel like killin someone. AAAAAAAAAAARRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh!!! STUPID!!! I hate you!!! end it n e other way then this... PLZ

Ooooooo. I feel all tingly now. I marvel at your genius.