Hi I love this, and I found a sweet little Sue called Misery by the author Miserylovescompany(that's not the worst story, Brooklyn by Brooklyn was)you get a prize if you guessed it was a Spot romance! I have not dared to go near the forty-something chapter Sue(shudders). Well, if you can please kill her off!

Shadow, that was awesome. I'm tempted to write you a mary sue just to use in the story. I really like it! Keep it up!
Gryff

//Wanders in// 'ello. I know nothing about this Canon, but with PPC fics, you don't really need any. They're just funny anyway.
Ehh . . . what was I going to say? Oh, yes. Having read the reviews, people seem to be under the impression that the PPC is your own idea. By the fact that you're listed on Miss Cam's links list, I assume you're authorised. However, it'd be nice if you told the readers this. I don't know whether that was in the lost Intro/Disclaimer, but . . . yeah.
Oh, and one other thing . . . no, two. One, some of the language may require an upgrade in the rating - we'd hate to see you get kicked off. The other - you say 'Character Reader'. Most of us these days use Character Analysis Devices (CADs). Dunno if this was a choice of yours or just a case of not knowing the term.
Yes, I'm a PPC Agent too.
hS

love the idea behind this. :-)

LOl I like the ooc meter, that's great!! Keep working on this, I love it.
~Silverpetra

Hey! Great story so far, strange idea, but great story.
I can't wait to read more, although a small part of me will be feverishly searching the following chapters for any unncanny similarities to my own stories.
Is it odd to say that in some way it's an honor to be mimicked? yea, probably is...
Anyway, sheesh, do you at least notify the author? Let them know that their work is being constructivly crticized? That would at least help to lower the number of Mary-Sue's...just a thought.
By the way...cool email.
Teepot.

this is a pretty funny fic you should really do something bout those stories were the girls are hoity toity and then get turned around by a newsie blach they are so unrealistic because a newsie and a really wealthy person would never ever mix with a poor newsie in the first place let alone fall in love with one

Ha! Please... PLEASE do something about songfics! They're the bane of my existance. I suppose I can sort of understand people writing songfics for Newsies... it WAS a musical, all things considered. But CRIPES, they're annoying.
Fader... I'm peeing. Not really, that's gross... but oh man, that was too great.
Lovely. I insist that you update quickly.

lol. sounds interesting! i can't wait to see where it goes from here. and who doesn't love MS bashing?! keep writing!
- Checkmate

Never fear, the One Eyed Dog will come through and review! Why am I talking like Scrappy Doo? Anyways, quite a loff, keep writing. I want fern, but not one named Jeremiah... he's a stalker.

Lol this is good. You can attack one of my newsies oc stories if you like. This is really cute.

Dammit, now I want a talking fern.
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This must be a special weakness of mine...but every time I come along even a mildly interesting bit of Sue-Bashing I have to drop everything and read it...from experience I know how standardly **-off they can sound. And this isn't one of them. *lunges at Twitch and Colleen, sees they're not there too last and falls down on the floor* UPDATE!
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XOX
Dakki