I think this is a great story and you should continue with it. Why'd you stop, anyway? You were doing so well!

Please, please, please continue, and please tell me the pairing will be Lucian/Selene!

This movie does ask for a sequel doesn't it? It's still very raw since it's only 2 chapters lenght, but you seem to be going well. So, who did die after all (I like Lucius, but Kramen? Well, it's your story)? And when is this happening? First it seemed it was set right after the movie, but if they had enough time to prepare to come after her, it seems later on. Which makes me wonder: what happened to the other covenant guy (whatever is name is, I can't remember now)? Will he show up in your story too? Definitly waiting for more.

oh, couldn't you've made your chapters bigger, these just leave me with that unfinished like taste...

I liked it, keep it up. I want to know where it's going.

You should NEVER...Leave these things hanging in the air like that they look like they got potential to become good stories.

Great story! Can't wait for more, you've really got me at the edge of my seat, here!

hey,
Better, better. I love to here Lucian ready to kick arse. Go Go Go!
Wilshire O'bloom

Hey,
Write more, more, more. This sounds great. More surprises. (Lucoan is too cool!)
Wilshire o'bloom
Ps. Try mine

O.o oh...
much better, much better!
*gives out three chears!*

Run away from the sun! -runs- Bwaha! Oh I like how you have it all broken off into people so far, must keep updating and bring more and more ok? -waits patiently for next update- Yes, I did mention the word patiently..
-Kia

That was pretty good. Please keep writing, k? Um, could you please make the chapters longer. Please? Anyho, good job! Continue, girl!
Aquaf5

ooh, I wonder what the pairing will be... can I guess? is it gonna be Selens/Lucian? is it Lucian/the-lil-necklace-pendant-thingy? i give up! write more please!

Yay! You updated!
That was a really good chapter, but you MUST write more... my salvation depends on it! LOL!

That was good. Keep writing. You should defidantly continue.
aquaf5

hey i'm pretty good at titles so if you want to mail me at or IM me at Rinkrat726 i'll brain storm with you anytime i love makin up titles and the story was good keep going