"Innocent schoolmates"? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!

"Innocent" my fat and smelly **. Dib did the world a favor. If those ** were torturing anybody else you'd all be calling him a hero.

You have to finish this, its one of the best anghish ive read on fanfiction, also im gonna do a comic of this fic,after my comic courses, hurry up pls you are about 2 years without uploading anything new pls update this fic

Seems you guys worked out your problems. That's good and such. Advice to all: have all the facts before insulting. Well, my work...um, my something here is done. I really am not sure what I did. o_o

~Kitsy

Sorry to get involved in others' business, but I have to say that at least from what I see in this recent argument, this "Clowgirl/Colleen" person just called Blue Eyes and Pirate Monkey (I assume) ** several times, I think Blue Eyes had a right to be angry.

That will be all.

~Kitsy

*clap* Beautiful. Absolutely Beautiful. I hope to see another chapter soon. You are officially on my favorite authors and favorite stories list :D.

Thanks for accepting my apology. You can be as harsh as you want with InvaderDom. She, & all my closest "friends", have flamed me today about my Rabbit Hole story on It really hurt me because I thought they liked my story. I feel really depressed now. One of my fiends, I mean friends, who flamed me was lashola18873. Later.

Hello Pirate Monkey, I have come to apoligize. I know it has been a while since the whole fight thing happened, but I've now realized what I said was spur-of-the moment & wasn't thought out. I'm sorry, & I will not do this again. If you like my writing style, read my stories (click my bio's homepage button). I'm considering removing my Inuyasha story & making a new one with the same title. Later!

Incredible in Mexican, which is what I prefer to my own arms... What I'm saying is it's AWESOME and that I'm not a self-cannibilist too I guess.

Yami-Aaron has big hair...

Okay, whatever. The only thing I have to reply to your novel of a review is this:

Questioning my writing ability now, are we? Compare this review with your review, and go ask any random person who they think would be a better writer. Even if I was a bad writer, everyone would pick me. Why? Because I have correct spelling, capitalization, and grammar. Let's leave it at that.

-BlueEyes

i'll say it again in this story, sorry Pirate Monkey.

to Colleen(aka Clowgirl), shaddup.
i'll handle my own mess.

BlueEyes, stop yelling, please.

first, if i was retarded, i would not be able to actually understand the word "Food" and stuff.

second, fighting never solves anything. i've learned for experience. here's a famous quote from some guy, "Never judge a man before you walk two moons in his moccosans." it means, don't go judging other people when you have no idea what their life is like.

third, your insults don't help as well. by yelling and insulting, you're just making more enemies. if you don't care, fine, i won't stop you.

to Colleen(again), leave BlueEyes alone.
like we do for each other, she's just looking out for a friend. we were mean and we had no right.

by the way, stop it with the cursing Colleen, you're not good at it. Nor am I when i can't think strait.

again, to BlueEyes, please don't call my friend a moron(even though she can be). it's pointless and you'll just prevoke her even more.

the reason i chose not to listen to Pirate Monkey was because i thought i could handle things myself, i was wrong. still, like i have no right to yell at you, you have no right to yell at my friend. she was only looking out for me like you look out for Pirate Monkey.

and if i do remember correctly, only Pirate Monkey was trying to help me. all you did was yell at me and call me a bad author. that won't solve anything. to tell you something, my series may end on the one i'm already writing because i want to make a story where i won't screw up on personalities called "Project Zim".

another thing, i haven't seen any of YOUR fanfictions, so i wouldn't be judging other people on how to write when we don't even know your penname and we can't read one of yours. if you don't have a penname, fine.

to Pirate Monkey, i read your review(the second one), your life kinda seems similar to mine. I'm unpopular, i'm gossiped about because i'm diffrent, and i am also being tripped by the popular dorks every so offten.

if you need to have more proof, ask Colleen, she's been my friend since 1st grade and can give you more info. still, i'm sorry for being mean. the day you yelled at me wasn't exactly the best day. someone had stolen my lunch while i was getting a soda, in gym, i had gotten hit in the head with a hocky puck, and a bunch of other stuff.

i was wrong to extract my anger on you, it was wrong and i hope your friend BlueEyes will come around to realize that i'm not exactly a bad person. i don't like being mean, it makes me look like that's my only emotion in my entire body.

we've both had our turns at yelling but i want it to stop. i would like to extend my hand of appology and also say sorry for judging you when i found out that your life isn't exactly perfect. i hope we can be friends in the near future along with BlueEyes if she'll forgive me for yelling at you.

with all do respect,
Dom ;D

Oh, joy, yet another moron to insult.

Oh, my. I don't think I can survive the terrible blows of your insults. Save me!

*rolls eyes* Do you really think your pathetic cuss words are going to scare me away from your retarted friend? I think not.

We're not being narrow-minded, WE WERE TRYING TO HELP. Your friend, and most likely yourself, are the narrow minded ones. She wouldn't even listen to Pirate Monkey's advice, instead insisting on continuing to be a terrible author and accepting no input at all.

With all my insults,
BlueEyes

P.S. You're a terrible writer as well. Just that I would add that in to make you feel better. *snorts*

You and you're ** friend Blue Eyes leave my friend alone. Is it wrong to be a little less narrow-minded about fanfiction like you two ** seem to be. So leave her alone and no more complaints from me.

Stop insulting my friend InvaderDom! You're being a conceited jerk for constantly flaming her. Give her some POSITIVE reviews for once. And if you don't like her story, then stop reading it stupid.

Okay. It's 12 hours later and I'm going to try this again.

I can only hope that this fic ends up being even a little more fair to Dib than it has been so far.

(Heart, sit down. It's Head's turn.)

Thank you. I agree that murder is wrong on a truly cosmic scale and inflicts an irreparable injury on the innocent family and friends of the murder victims.

However, I also believe that insanity puts it into an entirely different realm, one that the greatest legal, medical, and philosophical minds are still disputing, so I can hardly claim to have The Answer here either.

I am seeing a LOT of pressure being placed on Dib to own up to what he did, but whether it was even right or wrong is a question that a now completely insane Dib is no longer capable of appreciating. However it is impossible to lock up Dib's illness without locking Dib up along with it.

While it doesn't look like it so far, personally I hope this is where this fic is heading: At some point, at least some of the slain, most especially Gaz, Zita, and Zim (okay, the latter isn't very likely) really should break the stalemate by stepping forward, owning up to what they did to him first, and facing the role they played in it themselves. I mean seriously, they weren't exactly doing nothing to Dib for quite some time before his mental breakdown!

You have guts to be tackling such a relevant, timely, and explosive issue. Read the newspapers or watch the TV long enough, and I guarantee that some kid who was tortured into taking similar extreme measures will turn up. The elite of Columbine was far from alone in having complete impunity as they mercilessly bullied their fellow students, including two boys whose names everyone now knows...

I beg your pardon if I have gone on for too long, but having visited the official websites for the original play Bang Bang You're Dead, I dare to say that I am still holding out hope for Dib. In my view at least, he is no less a victim than those who were murdered physically instead of mentally.

I truly apologize for the swear words in my earlier review. While I do try to avoid any swearing on this site, that's Heart for you...

Okay. That's it. That does it. Where Gaz arrogantly swaggered up right in front of Dib while he was minding his own business just watching TV... AND changed the channel, right in his face... and then she... SHE!! had the gall to tell HIM to shut up and threatened him with physical pain for even talking during HER show, that's where I just could not stand it any more. I had to stop reading and post this NOW.

I dunno about anybody else who Dib got fed up with, in the miserable wretched tortured Hell on earth this fic describes him as enduring, but if I had to A. wake up to and B. go home to a Satanic hypocrite who treats me like THAT each and every single goddamned day, I can seriously see myself either murdering them or killing myself just to "MAKE IT STOP!"

Who.. WHO can seriously blame that poor rat bastard Dib for hearing voices?! That's the LEAST that anybody with a mind to lose would be driven to by this point! Skool, home, skool, home, skool, home, okay, you get it... the torture just does not ever EVER let up for him!

When you're insane, or in this case DRIVEN insane, you are not in any position to appreciate what you are doing or to visualize more healthy alternatives! A person with a broken mind can no more do that than a person with a broken leg can stand up and walk!

My God already.