That was so beautiful. Her rainbow... sigh.

This was an extremely well-written story, albeit rather disturbing at times. The only ciriticism I have is that it really doesn't feel complete even though the summary states that it's finished. Do you - or rather did you, as this was written a while ago, intend to continue this or write a sequel?

The summary says complete, but this doesn't feel finished. is there a sequel to come?

Hm...

Hooray!

Dear Elysia1:

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I have been reading this story for some time now and I am very confused, in your profile you have that this story is complete, but after reading chapter 24, the story does not feel like it has just ended, what is going on?

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Have you just left it at that with no real ending - please explain. Will there be more chapters or not?

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Yours,

Slate_One

Powerful and well-written story though I think some details are incompatible with canon.

"Severus wondered how many times that Lucius had dropped his baby." Poor Draco, no wonder he can't beat Harry on the Quidditch pitch.

I'm not sure Hagrid's as smart as that LOL but story continues to be engrossing and powerful.

Great beginning.

Oh this is a GREAT story. Very well done!

I especially loved this part:

"Can you blame me for favouring them?" he asked trying to keep the bitterness from his voice, "They need some unconditional approval, and if I keep them winning I could reduce their excuses for bitterness. Believe me, Albus, you will find no better ally against the dark forces than the Slytherin who turns out well. Theirs is a hard-won virtue. They can't pretend that evil is somewhere out there. They understand what they're up against. I'm trying not to speak for myself here; Decency and kindness and all those virtues you Gryffindors take for granted in yourselves didn't come as fairy gifts at my christening."

AWESOME paragraph there! Seriously.

I'm continuing now, but I just HAD to say that...

LT

I remember starting this story a long time ago, back when it was still a WIP, but I forgot to add it to my favorite's list so I never did keep up with it. You have written a beautiful plot and the characterizations are wonderful. I'm surprised it does not have many reviews since it is a very good fic. I think your story is one of the best Snape-centric fics out there. Good job!

I have read a lot of fanfics and normally I read it when I'm bored and never finish it because its...

A) stupidly put together

B) about somehting stupid

C) written stupidly

D) they never finsihed it and haven't updated for two years... which means they are stupid

or

E) I just don't remember what the name was and I didn't bookmark it

but this was a great fan fic, by far the best 'serious' fan fic I've read.

great story! very good! will there be a sequel? pretty please?

cya

DK

wow... this is such an amazing story! the plot and emotions are so well written, this is a really good story compared to my stuff. i was so into to this that i read it all in one morning (which is this morning!)! n_n this was such an awesome fanfic, i'll be happy to read more of your other ones!

-Lala_the_Panda