I love the one sided VincentxHojo you put in there!

wonderful this was awsome writing!!

This story is so dark, it's pitch black. Yet, it was beautifully written as well as told. You see a different sides to all these characters and in the end they all find peace. It's amazing.

wow...great!

cool...

Beautiful... Symbolic, mythic and otherwordly...a dark, haunting and very final closing for this very unique 'fic. I love the sense that the characters have come full circle, that the events have played themselves out to the extreme and now it's finally over. There's a powerful sense of relief, inevitability and completeness to this, especially effective for such a short piece. Incredible writing.

Now this was *brilliant*. Haunting...a really disturbing piece. I think this was amazingly written - I love the eerie, half-mad, dreamy atmospohere you created, and the imagery was incredible...beautiful and horrible at the same time (a lot like the 'fic itself). You wrote Hojo and Lucrecia really well, getting right down to the core of their characters (you give a great Hojo, especially) and their relationship...I could never imagine how a reunion between Hojo and Lucrecia would ever play out, but you did a great job of it. And I loved how you stressed that all four of them were linked...it adds a great dimension to their relationships.

My favourite part in the story would have to be this: "Two mothers, two fathers, governing over a son who's already dead and all of us insane."

Wow. Just...wow. I *love* that image. It's just perfect.

Can't wait for the final chapter!

Wow. This was so intense. I love how you write a different Lucrecia to what so many other authors have in mind - a woman completely destroyed by Jenova. I love how you emphasised that the only thing she cares about anymore is her son, even if not being able to comfort him is driving her mad. Her conversation with Vincent was really beautiful and brutal - it really got to me; that it's too late for both of them...it's a very original idea and you wrote it so *well*.

This was simply amazing. Just sheer ... brilliance. Hauntingly beautiful, it captures the characters wonderfully. Please, write more soon.

Wow, that was very...otherworldly. Strange and beautiful in its horror. Well done again! Will there be a third chapter?

This...is very intresting. I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^

Hmm...
That was really unexpected what you put in about Hojo and Vincent, but I suppose it might fit...
So you used Cyrus as Hojo's first name? That name makes me think of a completely different person...he'll always be just Hojo to me.
This chapter was kinda confusing at the beginning, but it was still really well written, just like the first. So, I hope you'll put in the next chappie soon.

Interesting, really interesting...
I always wondered why Vincent told Lucrecia Sephiroth was dead, I mean, if he told her Sephiroth was alive, would that have changed the storyline to FF7? Because then, she could probably convince Sephiroth that she was his mother and that Jenova was just some crazy monster.
This fic was very well written, and I hope to read the next chapter soon.

Whoa. Very good. Excellent grammer and spelling, and you kept the characters true to their form... A great read.
~Chibi Sephy

That was beautiful. And ties in nicely with the game. Actually, I'm not that big a fan of Vincent (what the hell am I doing reading this?!?! I ask myself) but then, you know that already. But this is a great piece of writing. Very well done(geez, doesn't my abilities to praise just knock you down in their creativness?). I hope you continue. All the best for future writing endeavours.
^_~