XD is all I can say to sum this fic up. Brilliant. Whenever you continue this, I'll be sticking for the updates! Cupcakes win, you silly kunoichi Taki.

Dont know why I didnt review this when I put it as a favourite story. After being initially annoying, each "erk" makes me laugh more and more. Especially with the Auron/duck explanation being totally mad (and I have played FFX). Sometimes childish humour just - works. A small gem.

Well, get on with it, man!

Do another chapter! Do another chapter!

This sucked.

Okay, seriously.

The 'erks' aren't funny, at all. Please take them out. It will make this story infinitely more readable, especially if you plan to continue it.

Man that was one hell of a story, I'm still laughing at the part where Taki sounded like
Uncle in Jackie Chan Adventures.*sees Taki and
Mitsurugi*
Taki: Theres a rumor spreading around that you
know where to find a wishing well.
KG: Yeah its right behind you *wishing well suddenly appears*
Taki: How did we not see that? Mitsurugi go make that wish already.
*drops a coin in the well*
Mitsurugi: I-erk wish-erk that-erk I'd-erk
stop-erk saying ERK!

no more erks please! hehehehe other than that so far, i like!
btw ahou is a stronger term of idiot, um kinda like calling someone a 'retard' in english just thought you'd like ta know!

I must admit, your fic was wacky, pal. One poece of advice, though - if you wanna have Mitsurigi say "erk" so much, why not just copy and paste it!!?!?!?!?
Please write up Chapter two soon!
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Hai. Please continue. ^_^

CONTINUE!! PLEASE! This is the funniest SC fic I've read ever!

yeah, the erking is pretty annoying.
maybe u should remove it soon. otherwise it is pretty cool.

^_^ Very funny!
I like how Mitsy and Taki are portrayed.

The grammar is well done and the sentaces are good. Just "erk" sounds weird. Other then that, I am proud of your good grammar. Very proud.

I liked it, despite the OOCness in it. The fic´s good specially if you take in count that it only took you 1h 30´ to write it, in my case it took me an entire month just to write _two_ miserable chapters.
- Never got the ´erk´ thing. Must be because I never played FFX.
- Don´t listen to the SC ´purists´. I have read a lot of crappy ´humor´ SC fics like this and this was the best of them all.

OK... I wrote a review before but then the site experienced a traffic-overload. -.- So... now to re-write my review! You have a different style of humour to a lot of the randomness that I usually read *cough* and write *cough* and I like it! I hope that you'll continue despite the fact that some people find your humour dull. *rolls eyes* Keep it up! (And might I add that associating Mitsurugi with Auron with a duck is quite odd in an amusing way. ^_^)