really, really good. cute ending. ja.

*sniff* really sad...

Aw...That was so cute! Sad, but cute. I implore you to write more! My only criticism, however, is that you jumped a little too fast from one period of time to the next. Other than that, it was great! You have a nice style.

;_;
so cute..
I LOVED IT!

...I worship you. *bows* T'was a very touching story. (Vash's last line, "I could feel your hold," broke the floodgates for me. ;-;) Kudos for exploring a much-neglected scene/situation of Trigun.

Aw I loved this :) I don't think I've seen that missing scene opportunity taken before ~_^ original trigun fics are getting harder and harder to find. well done.

Aww.. So sweet! I can't really think of anything more to say, that pretty much sums it up!

WOW!! so...cute! I've been looking for a fic like this for a long time. all people want now is humor. I'm just not up for humor. But again, the fic was great, please continue.
Thanks! It kept me from falling over the edge.
Fuzz-Miester