Wow! You are great at writing!

Love it! Great job! The chapter is not too long and not too short AWESOME JOB!

And here I thought I was the only one on here who still read the paperback editions! ("Eye on Crime" is one of my favorites...) Anyway, sorry I've been a little late getting to this one, but- I'm new here.

I just discovered this; it seems like a doozy so far...

This story great! I really like ur stories!

Great story! A+ and 1,0 points extra credit

Wow! I was almost crying for a while...sniff! But this is an awesome story and...well, I could go on forever but that's enough and hope you'll put in another story soon!

AWesome Ending!! Cept it ended so suddenly!

It's over?? There's no more?? NO! But it was so good, I loved it so much! You put so much detail into the story it made me feel like I was really there..show don't tell, as my creative writing teacher always says. Excellent job, you are a superb writer! Keep up the good work and I hope to see more by you in the future!

Great story! A+

It didn’t take long for the shot to take effect. Before their eyes, Joe’s frame seemed to shrink as he lay down and curled into a ball. --a fantastic line. I follow this story probably right from the start and I enjoy every update, it's really good :)

POOR JOE! They better find him soon!! I wanna see Fenton and Frank beat up the bad guys for doing this!

I want to know what happens to Joe!! more story please!! asap!! :-) what happens to Joe's health??

This story is fantastic! It's got me hooked! I cheated and read the last couple of chapter but then had to read the whole posted 28 chapters! You are a very talented story teller and you seem to have your facts in order. Great job! Can't wait for more!

The story is taking a very intriguing turn. Keep up the good work!