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Cristalake
2008-05-02 . chapter 2
This is a very good fic but it's very... heavy. Sadly, it's probably what would have happened had there been a post-war GW manga. When I say heavy, I mean it's not as light-hearted and humourous as I like. There is a lot of tension in the air and it drags me down a bit but don't worry... Delusions of Normalcy is still super good. :-)
sparkley-tangerine
2007-01-31 . chapter 7
I love this story so much! Fianlly a realistic approach to what might have happened after the wars. People forget their still kids- sixteen to seventeen yars old at the most- and terrorists too. And the corruption in the ranks, very cool!

I'm really hoping this fic hasn't been abandoned since the alst update was sometime in 2004 but maybe the plot bunny will bit again soon right?
Orahiko
2005-09-19 . chapter 7
Oh my god...I love this. Please, please continue?
Kasifya
2005-02-22 . chapter 7
Hello there,

I just found your story on another site, and decided to see if it was on fanfiction so i could add it to my author alerts if it was, and lo, it is :D:D

I really enjoy the thought you put into how the world, in real life, might actually react to the prospect of having 5 trained killers in the form of 5 boys suddenly be lauded as heros.

I also find the way you portray their (the pilot's) high strung nervousness to be facinating, and to be honest, a lot more realistic than most of the fics that I've see.

Thank you so much for an awesome story, and hope that you'll be updating it sometime!

Scratch that, am I allowed to beg? I will if you think that it'll get you to update on this story again...

:)

~Kasi.
Lady of the Dawn
2005-01-09 . chapter 1
I am truly amazed at the lack of reviews this fic has gotten, because simpley put it is one of the greatest fic in this genre that I have read. Realistic and the pilots are in-character (which is really difficult), so I for one am mighty curious as to what happens next, so i hope you will continue writting

Ratioq
Futile Faith
2004-08-31 . chapter 7
Great story. I just found and refused to stop reading it until the chapters ran out! It was so very believable and everyone was kept in character without using the usual stereotype. You are one the best authors I have read from. You are up the with authors like Kracken, Maldoror and Link Worshiper
ShinigamiPhoenix
2004-06-01 . chapter 7
This is a fantastic story. i love that you've shown how everyone wouldnt immediately love the g-boys just because they ended the war. i mean, they were terrorists and killed a helluva lot of people, and yet a lot of authors seem to forget that and just have everyone love them. you've managed to show how divided the people are on their opinions, and i like that. i also like how you've played to the pilots' abilities, how they were put through some intense training, and how they aren't really very comfortable around even each other, always tense and alert. oh, and the bit with them learning to be normal was fantastic, especially the bit with the food. i couldnt stop laughing when trowa said the pizza was fused to the shelf. so, anyway, enough babbling, you're gonna update soon, right? come on, i wanna read more!
Luv
ShinigamiPhoenix
Raebef
2004-05-06 . chapter 1
loved it just so u know i think i am bordering on obsessed with this story! write more o i will comme for your blood ^.^v
Pheonix Eternia
2004-04-11 . chapter 1
You are a very horrible person. Downright evil. You go and write this great story, then wait forever to update! I'm sinking into a circle of depression, here! Every day, I wake up and check-but no! No update! Damn you! I love this story! Spit it out! I'll bombarde your inbox with GW pics if I have to, even with Yahoo! It only sends 3 pics at a time, and I have over three hundred! I'll fill your box past capacity! HAH!
Freefall
2004-03-27 . chapter 7
EXCELLENT!
nutshell
2004-03-26 . chapter 6
i like this chapter...and i like all of the chapters before, and prolly the chapters to come too. everything is down to earth, tense, and lovable =) actually, instead of lovable, i can't wait to see all the controversy and class interactions. i'm addicted to ppl's thots of incredulity ^^;;
an idea popped into my head: you could use paintball as a field day practice. in korea, u can spend a weekend+ in a huge terrain place doing paintball; u get food and supplies rations too and at night, u have to have ppl watching post against other groups. i think something like that would be funky.
Asitha
2004-02-24 . chapter 5
This is a good story so far, please continue soon!
Freefall
2004-02-06 . chapter 5
Marvelous! EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!
Crysania Fay
2004-02-05 . chapter 5
Oh God... What in the world would he get for them for breakfast? I'm almost afraid to think of the possibilities... I think you should have some more of the guys thinking of Duo... Duo-sympathy is always a good thing. UPDATE SOON!
Ani Anime
2004-02-03 . chapter 4
I wasn't sure with your summary if I would like the story but I did.
I can't see where your going with it but it is interesting. There is a nice interaction with the characters.
Update soon!
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