where the hell did you come up with this stuff so tell me what where you thinking when you wrote this story it had so many things wrong with it that I could've stopped reading it but you are still the superior writer apart from Diamond but still good.

this is quite the work of someone who claimed to be a novice at writing but It doesn't matter I want your help with my story please its about latia's and requyza before your story begins A proluge if you would have it. plus How can a story begin with out how every one was created. HU.

{stares blankly at screen while muse throws up, causing a large portion of the floor, the floor below it, the floor below that one, and about six feet of foundation to desolve}

{stares blankly} you included a XENOMORPH in this story?! SWEET! and to think, I was beginning to hate this story with a burning passion. {reads part where spooky actually attacks} You forgot to include the razor sharp tail in your list of attacks. By the way, Yin is female. Also, the number of people (so to speak) who have been fighting in this fic makes it sound like some kind of video game. as for Gantu, never have I read a fic where he has been screwed over this badly. And what about 625? did he survive the crash? can he swim?

{struggles to keep muse from clawing at screen}

Me: O.O ... I hate to say it, but poor Gantu... He's only doing his job...
Anime: And that bit at the end... (Shudders)

This was quite an amusing story. I hope to see more of your writing soon.

~Morning Dove

uh yeah topper is a guy and while we are at it yin is a girl. sorry for the flame.

(call me K9)
Well...I stand corected, Harry Potter actually IS good for something! And that Ban-kar crap makes me glad I'm a Christian, where you don't have to sufer all your life just to get redemption. Just admit Jeasus is the son of God. (AND MEAN IT!)

a really good story. i look forward to reading another one.

ohh, I like stories with interventions!

Argh, this review is for the epilogue, but ff.net is acting up. Excellent way of closing the story- not closing it, leaving loose ends in so many directions. Oh, dear, I was quite concerned until we found out 625 was Ophis. I somehow didn't see 625 as into bondage. Especially not with Gantu. The physical improbabilities of that particular match is disturbing, to say the least.
I'm gonna agree with you on the blitznag thing, as I realized there's an episode where 625 uses it. Babyfier, I think. 625 isn't quite the same as other experiments, but still..

Gantu's paranoia is hilarious! I didn't expect THAT would be what caused Stitch's change.

OH NO! Poor Angel! I feel so sorrty for her. I hopem Stitvh pulls out of this change soon. Formhis Ohana's sake if not his own. Those paining and sculptures almsot made me puke, they were so gruesome.

I didn't Stitch wouild take to Religion. I can just imagine Peakley making Tofu Thanksgiving. The fight with Big Dummy was also good.