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Lina
2009-11-29 . chapter 46
Great story, thanks for sharing! =)
TutelaTwin
2009-11-22 . chapter 46
Aw, that was so no fair. I wanted to know who the other apprentices were!

Still, it was a good story, and that was a fairly good ending. I would also like to know what happened between Harry and Malfoy, just because their interactions were so everpresent in the books, and I have a bit of a soft spot for Draco, I suppose. But still, Draco did interact with Alec, and I want to know how he reconciled the two views of Harry (when he was Harry, and when he was Alec) or if he had a problem with it at all.
cronenus
2009-10-30 . chapter 46
hi just finshed both storys, I liked them alot now I can start on your other storys...
dead feather
2009-09-20 . chapter 21
Are you still around? I can't believe I re-discovered this!.. actually, I can't believe I've been reading hp fanfiction for this long time. lol
This story was just as good as I remebered. The only thing odd, now that I'm reading it all in one go, is that it's making me tired. Harry, and many others, seem to always be tired and lacking of energy or sick. Didn't notice that before, I think. I would've preferred to see him full of energy but no use of whining about it anymore. :)
Angelauthor14
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Fantastic writing, it's so absorbing and well written!
Rainbow-Monkey-1993
2009-08-30 . chapter 46
This story is amazing- you did a really great job! please write a sequel! :)
The Dark Lordess KARRRRMA
2009-08-27 . chapter 46
I absolutely LOVED this story! It took me about three days to read it because of school, but I finally finished it. You are an awesome writer and this is an awesome plot. Thanks so much for writing it. I hope you continue with a sequel.
~Yebba~
ZukoLuvahh
2009-08-24 . chapter 46
OH.MY.GOD. i JUST started reading ur fics today, and i got HOOKED. and by hooked, i MEAN HOOKED. i spent like at LEAST 7 hours, mayb more, just on my computer reading ur fics! OMGG THESE 2 HAVE HAD ME HOOKED THE WHOLE ENTIRE DAY AND IM SO SAD THAT THEY ARE DONE!! OMG!! :'( i am SO reconmending this fic on my profile and on ALL my stories :) this was such an amazing fic! OMGG!! oh and btw, what was writen in the leter sirius wrote harry? and when is the sequal coming out!?!?!?!?!?!? OMG i STIL cant get over it!! OMG! the only actual thing non-positive i have to say, howeevr, is that i was wondering how harry's size could pass off as as small as an 11 year-old? and the only other thing i found weird, no offence, was that the teacehrs couldcarry him and al, and even AFTER dropping his facade, i would have thought that he would have stopped jumkping into ppls arms :P but u know xD no offence at ALL tho... i was just wondering. OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH! sorry im still smitten by it XD anyways, since it is 1:25 am here and my eyes are exhausted from being on the comp the whole day, ima go to sleep now :P anyways, bye happy reading and writing :) and - again - AMAZING fic :) it ACTUALLY got me to like snape, even tho the character u made him inot eventualy wasnt cannon at all xD and, sirius being my fav character, u actually got me to get - yes, ill admit it - angry with him for atacking snape :P anwyas, i am now done my ranting - NOT! but im just going to botle it in for now, cause im beat xD and my mom told me to go to bed like 2 hours ago, and i promised her i would *blushes* XD now i really wanna rite a harry snape fic of my own now, and just to tell u - i ahd HATED snape taking care of harry fics - but now, THANKS TO U :) - i LOVE them :) thansk so much for widening my reading perspective thingy (whatever u call it :P) anyways, ok bye FOR SURE now xD and thanks for posting, and, again, it was amazing :) BYE HAPPY WRITING AND READIN :) (PLEASE keep writing ;P)
Rushingriver
2009-08-24 . chapter 46
Hey, this is a really good story! I hope that you will write a sequel soon! I would love to read any further works you have on the Web of Lies story's!
~Rushingriver
CreativeGirl
2009-08-15 . chapter 46
You've done a pretty good job; I'm gonna check out your other fan fics, hope that makes you feel good. It'd make ME feel good.
CreativeG
2009-08-14 . chapter 40
AWW...
I seriously LOVE the Snape Harry bonding thing
CreativeGirl
2009-08-14 . chapter 37
At first, I thought CLIFFIE,
but now i suspect its that girl, Lan.
Did she have bright blue eyes?
I'll go back and check; i forgot how she looked.
NO, she had blonde hair, but it didnt mention her eyes.
Whatever, I think it was Lan.
CreativeGirl
2009-08-14 . chapter 33
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, ESPECIALLY THE END, SO TOUCHING.
I JUST LOVED IT.
CG
2009-08-13 . chapter 32
I was SO disappointed when the chapter ended; my computer time is used up, but i thought i could finish the chapter.
but then, im like, aww, i wish it'd still been longer..
Anyways, Im Lovin' It
CreativeGirl
2009-08-13 . chapter 31
I wanted to clear up what I meant in the last review; I meant that how you positioned Severus Snape in this fan fic, and the events occuring in this chapter, make me more fond of him in THIS FAN FIC.
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