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odango3 2008-11-25 . chapter 46
All in all a very sweet story. Sort of strange how Sirius dissappeared for almost the entire time. Uncle Sev was adorable! Thank you for the smiles.
BoredHpfan 2008-11-11 . chapter 46
I LOVE THIS SERIES! Oh my god, you are brilliant. :D

Sequel? Please?

Amazing Job!
merodeadores4ever 2008-10-17 . chapter 46
love it=)
Sabishii Kage Tenshi 2008-10-12 . chapter 46
Holy ** was that much to read! =D I love it. And another sequel!? I can't wait! =D
Eva-Maria 2008-10-02 . chapter 21
I often wait until the end of a finished story to review, but since you've obviously been getting flames, I wanted to make sure you knew I was reading ;) and appreciating your story!

I am not a native speaker either, but I never would have guessed you weren't, your grammar is not "way off" as far as I can see - and there are so many fanfictions out there that DO have that problem - but I think it is more important anyways that you have a wonderful storyline and style, which fascinates the reader. I have only found the first part of Web of Lies yesterday and since I am now at this point you can guess that I have barely stopped reading to sleep.
While I do read a lot of fanfiction as well as books, I also have a life, so that is not normal practice for me and hopefully tells just how much I have enjoyed reading this so far.

Great emotions and feelings with always a hint of suspense underlying everything (What will happen when Snape finds out?) and a wonderfully easy flow, making sure it never gets boring... sounds like a perfect fanfiction to me!

I hope you can manage to not let weird demands for longer chapters and flamers ruin the experience of writing for you or any joy you might take from this story.
I am grateful that you ARE writing this (or were, as it is) and that you share with everyone! Thank you! :)
Global Conquest-er 2008-08-17 . chapter 46
GREAT STORY!! I think that I will search your profile for a sequel, but really, I dont care. This story ended FABULOUSLY - just like how it started. However, because I like it so much I will search. If there isnt one, however, there is no regrets from me - it was good enough not to NEED a sequel as most stories do. Thank you; this story was an AMAZING addition to the scores of HP fanfiction.
JosELynne 2008-08-09 . chapter 34
this is so awsome!
Celebwen Telcontar 2008-08-03 . chapter 35
Oh... a Dragon! Cool! Is that Alec's Animagus form now?

CT
teachergirl 2008-08-03 . chapter 46
In this chapter you had Harry reprimand Sirius for calling Snape names and in a previous chapter you had Harry do the same to Ron. BUT, you didn't have Harry say a word about Snape calling Sirius names over and over again. You might not like Sirius, but you should be consistent. You should either have him chastise Snape or remove the name calling. The Harry you created would not let anyone call people names in his presence.
calileane 2008-08-03 . chapter 46
I thought web of lies was the prequel of danger of the past... but there are differences beetween how Harry is said to destroy the dark lord in each storie...

Is it really the prequel or has it become a storie apart?

Even so those two stories are amazing and wonderfully written. They are trully unique. Thanks for writting them.
Celebwen Telcontar 2008-08-03 . chapter 30
Well, Sev's been taking this very good lately! Of course, Sal has been giving him some help, byt still! And poor Albus!

CT
Celebwen Telcontar 2008-08-03 . chapter 16
Poor Alec... So confused with everything to do!

CT
SiriusBlackIsGod 2008-07-10 . chapter 46
I loved it! Please please please write a sequel!
CrayonsPink 2008-07-08 . chapter 46
I loved both of the Web of Lies stories! Great job!
FrostedMidnight 2008-06-02 . chapter 46
I absolutely loved this fanfic! I've read both this one and the prequel to it today, they were so interesting I couldn't seem to stop reading! I loved your writing style and seeing Harry put into Ravenclaw was definantly interesting. Well, I shall stop rambiling now, I hope this review makes some sense to you as it's currently very late...strike that its actually become very early. Once again, I really enjoyed this series and apologize for my long winded review!
~Regards~
Animedorkette
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