Jeez, Bagel Woo, chill out. You need to flame a REAL bad fanfic. I like this one. *pout*

O.O, this is how my face looks now, i am severely disturbed. I put u in my author alerts, cause this story is too funny. or song fic anyway or series of song fics...etc.

Please, please, I beg you, just STOP THIS now, okay? I know you're trying to express your admiration for X-Men: Evolution as well as your personal creativity through your writing, but what you're doing in this story is NOT ORIGINAL. You're typing out song lyrics and a line or two of dialogue and calling it YOUR story. That is NOT an original, creative story. NOBODY wants to read a story almost entirely comprised of song lyrics. It is unbearably boring. And you call it a parody? It's not in the least bit funny. It's somebody else's song. Where's the funny? Stories like this don't make people laugh, they make people roll their eyes. Please stop typing out song lyrics and try writing a REAL story instead. I'm sure you really could write a decent story if you actually TRIED.

I like it! Do Rahne please.

Ok, I'm sorry, but that was pointless. It's not a story--it's just copying lyrics from a song and pasting them into a completly pointless scene. Seriously, please just stop.

LOL! I don't know who to pity more, John, or Piotr and Remy, or myself for reading this(no offense, great fic, just the creepy song), or Wierd Al. Anyway, it was good.

Aw, poor Jamie. (Huggles him.)

Poor Jamie. I love that kid.
But some scary stuff: I was honestly considering doing a Jamie music video once... To this song. Muahaha.

'ndito, poor Jamie. He's always being left behind. The song fits him perfectly.