a few too many periods in there but great story. I loved it.

Naruke: *bursts into hysterical tears* I remember when I read this! It was so so sad! I though Sasuke had actually died!
Shikamaru: Yeah, it was pretty sad. I like the way you seemed to be writing down the thoughts. It kinda seemed like he was dictating them to you and you wrote them down, ya know?