 Kaydreams 2007-10-11 . chapter 14That is an awesome story! I adored it! |
 gekofan776 2007-07-25 . chapter 14i could picture this being in the anime man wow ur really good |
 Scarlet Amaranth 2007-05-22 . chapter 19This fic definitely delivers ^o^ The plot is awesome and it's a nice change from all the one shots I've been reading in the One Piece fandom. I love the fight scenes. The characters are amazingly in-character that it doesn't feel like a fanfic at all. Loved how Robin puts an eyedrop, I could totally picture Odachi putting that in the manga if ever she hurt her eye.
m(-_-)m *bows* thanks for the wonderful read! |
 Kira 2005-11-16 . chapter 19 D'aw. That was ADORABLE and very fitting with the series. Great characterization besides. I look forward to more from you! |
 Namipower 2005-10-17 . chapter 1I am in awe... I have no more to say... |
 Vespera 2005-10-02 . chapter 19Very nice gen-fic! Funny, cute, and absorbing adventure. I particularly enjoyed Zoro's and Sanji's battles. Inventive ways to topple opponents designed to exploit their perceived weaknesses. And Sanji's response to Chopper's "rescue" was right on-character. |
 Namipower 2005-08-07 . chapter 19 This is one of, no the best fanfic I've read. Although I ha ven't read many, I loved the plot, the writing style, not to mention that it was about my favorite character, Nami. Well done, I hope many more fanfics will come. |
 nikuwadoko 2005-06-20 . chapter 8Wow, you've got a good plot going on there. I like the entire idea of the 'two villians with different motives'. I will finish reading soon^^ |
 nikuwadoko 2005-06-18 . chapter 9A well-planned fic! I'm not done reading yet, but I just want to let you know that I'm enjoying everything, so far in my reading! |
 sylver rain 2005-05-12 . chapter 19a fantastic story. I felt it deserved a lot more reviews though. Overall, you should be proud. |
 KuroKame 2005-02-27 . chapter 19Whoo! I definitely love this story. I can't come up with anything to say about it that hasn't already been said, but I really love the way you handle the characters. You're insipring me to write better. Thank you for a good read. |
 S. Sakurai 2004-06-13 . chapter 19This is really good - I especially like the twist about the villains getting a second chance at the end. The bounty hunters that were all specialized to take on a particular member of the crew were really cool as well. |
 Mavado 2004-05-14 . chapter 18Awesome story, you're one of the best (if not THE best) fanfiction writer on One Piece.
I like that you included my favorite character as well...
You hardly ever see a story featuring Robin (much less a good one).
One small thing though.
The reason Robin got off so light from Coverque's attack (as far as I can tell) is that once she retracted her eyes the chemical didn't stay in her eye (preventing further damage).
However, the same would go for any medicine applied to it. Chopper would probably have some things to say about that...
Then again it's likely he did, but gave up after a dozen or so tries.
On a different note:
It would be interesting to see Robin go clothes shopping, seeing as the only thing that keeps her from creating fullbody copies of herself (as far as I can tell) is that she can't use her powers to create clothes.
However when shopping this wouldn't be a problem and she could easily try on a dozen outfits at a time (I wonder how Sanji would react). |
 Emotwo 2004-04-05 . chapter 19 Incredible!! This story was so good that they should make a OP-movie of it! Kick-**!! ^^ |
 AnimeFreakPerson 2004-04-05 . chapter 19Nice. ^^ |