OMFG that was so good. I'm glad that Kayleigh at least has flashbacks of memories of him.

Awesome story. The Butterfly effect is one of my favorite movies.

Great job!
I hope to read more from you.

You should do a sequel to this with more chapgters



Mary

good job, I really liked this story.

That was really good, you should be a writer, lik eprofessionally.

Nicely written. Very cute. I luved it. Wonderful job..

I've read several fanfic today, but yours has been the only one worth my time reviewing. It's different (through I suppose it is as highly improbable as The Butterfly Effect itself), there arn't many Kayleigh centered fics to begin with and none that I've seen with HER having a "flashback moment". The language is beautiful, yet flowing and casual. There are few grammatical and spelling errors, if any, and it's all very consistant. I especilly like the lines: " He’s just an ordinary man I have never meet and will never see again. Just another face in the crowd.". Awesome job.

Yay! One where Kayleigh remembers stuff! Yay!

So sad. :-( But your adjectives are great!

It was just wonderful. It was short,liric and sad, exactly what I wanted to read about the end of this great movie.

Congratulations!

You're the first writer I have been tempted to post on. That idea is pretty much what I was thinking, when it ended. I've got a fuller ending, and I am thinking about joining the site, and posting a few fanfictions I have written. Very good, and please, if you have more, update again. =)

That was soo good! You are an extremely talented writer.. great job! I LOVE this movie.. it's my favourite one! I loved how you actually put a story with that ending.. it was so frustrating to see them just turn away from eachother! Im hoping to start writing a fic for this section.. I've also written in School of Rock and One Tree Hill.. I hope to read more from you!
>>BrOoKe

Well, at the beginning, things didn't flow as nicely as they should of. You had unnecessary descriptions...basically alot of unnecessary material. But the idea was grand. and the way you wrote your ending was highly impressive. You do have a way with words, and your ending made up for the awkwardness in the beginning.

:) Overall, great job

Casa

Write more that was great!

I saw Butterfly Effect a few days ago on DVD for my 2nd time. It still gives me goosebumps!
I liked how you switched it, you also used excellent detail on many things. Great work.
Something you also might want to know:
the DVD has 2 endings! I just now saw the one you write about! Rent the DVD and see the 2nd!
Melissa:]