Really good so far. :( poor Vincent

Okay. Not Romance. Well. ARE YOU ALIVE OVER THERE! I think this should realy continue! I shall bug you to no end if you don't Especially since this fic is getting good so far!

You know, you began this a bit over three years ago, so somehow I doubt you'll ever continue it. So, in a way, this review is pointless. But I'm leaving it anyway...

You're a bit repetitive in your writing (I mean, you use the phrase, "complicated series of buckles" twice in the same sentance.), but otherwise, it's not bad. I can't really judge on style or plot or anything like that, because you have three paragraphs.

It's a good beginning, and it would be nice if you would some day get around to finishing it... if you even write fanfic anymore. Actually, it would be more than nice, because it is, as I said, a good beginning, and it would have been nice to see more.

I'm putting this on story alert on the offchance that you do, someday, decide to update, but if not... well.. whatever. It's your choice.

This is interesting! You should come back to this piece! You really should!

do more and quikcly.

Where's the rest of it?
I want more

This is good, update soon.

It's good. I think you should continue. Soon though...:D
-Aymeleh