It's me again!! I know what you're thinking *oh god not her* but I'm here anyway!! ^^ this is the third poem I've read of yours and I love it..again I love the structure!! And the angst!! I'll keep the authors you had in mind...ttfn! I'll reveiw more whether you like it or not!!

this is good, and i think you should write out a full version and if you can't/won't can I? if so can you email me a detailed wroting of how you want it to be? oh and i'm going to your web site! (once she figures out how...) sayonara bye bye!

your poems are so AWESOME! i cannot believe it. i hope that you keep writing.
keep laughing,

~DKR

i think this is a wonderful poem, and that u should write more

Sad, sad, kanashii kanashimi.
Okay...
i loved it.
^^

Again w/ Kurama? Still, very good though, me loved it! Do someone else for a change please.

byefornow,
~sabrina

I liked this!

awe *cries* really pretty

0_0 Wow, that's like one of the best poems I read!

Hey, Dancer! Finally getting around to reading *other* people's stuff - being a little stuck on my own right at the moment (Kurama: long-suffering sigh, Hiei: yeah, *great* place to leave us, too!). Anyway, I really like this! Nicely captures the quiet resignment with which Kurama accepts things at times, considering that he still has yet to forgive *himself* for his past and for the lie of his current life as Shiori's son. Kuddos!! ^_^

Cool! I really liked it - you should write more poetry like this. Most of the time, I find that poems that rhyme get off focus because the author can't find a word to rhyme, but this one really worked well. And that's why you should write more!

Well, right now I'm dead-tired and I actually wouldn't be suprised if I fell asleep right here at my desk, othwerwise I'd probably have something articulate to say... But for now, arigato for putting me on your author alert list... Or something... And the poem was good... I liked it... A lot. You mentioned you liked rock music in your bio thing; ever heard of Thrice? They radiate angsty-ness... Anyway, Ja ne... Going to bed now...

ooh...
I love kurama tourture/angst, so I saw the summary and checked this out. I like it. You are good.
Sharnay

Wow! What a lovely poem. ^^
It was beautiful and very moving. Jeez, I luv it so much I'm going to go read it again!
You're very talented and I really enjoyed reading this chapter!
Happy writing. ^-^

nice...i like this poem ^_^ it's realli good, so don't got any tips for you...ya...u should write another poem - ur good at it ^_^i luv smilies ^_^''