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| yllom21 2006-10-08 ch 10,  | abuseInteresting story, you should probably put an epilogue up cause its a sudden end and all. Nice job and adorable story. |
| devils wings 2006-07-07 ch 6, | abuseill have to finish your story later but its good so far |
| AgentValentine 2005-08-14 ch 10, | abuseI love all of your stories and you are without a doubt the best Rikku/Paine writer! |
| ChristinaRoss 2005-06-23 ch 10, | abuseheya! i've read all your ffx-2 stories and i love them all. i've also been to your site about rikkuxpaine and i love it too. before i went to that site, it had never occured to me of rikku and paine but now i'm completely hooked on them. their my favourite pair from anything! their just so cute together. anywho... thanks for the great stories! hope you write more sometime. byes! |
| RiPa 2005-06-01 ch 10, | abuseNice. Hope for more off of u in the terms of writing. thisd is very cool. |
| Johnny H. 2005-05-03 ch 10, | abuseWow. I just read the whole story in *nearly* one sitting. I love this. Everything. It's so well put together, save a few errors, but I can easily forgive them. This is, without a doubt, one of my favorite stories on the site. Excellent. |
| Thorn on a Rose 2005-01-09 ch 10, | abuseCUTE!! I was sad when I read teh parts about Paine's pain over losing her family or failing her sister. The fight scene between Paine and Rikku was good and after...even better^-^ An epilogue would be wonderful! |
| Thorn on a Rose 2005-01-09 ch 3, | abuseHello! Thought I would just say that the move Rikku pulled on Paine is something my siblings and I do to each other and we call it a zurbert^-^ It's so cool that someone else knows this move too!^-^ I'm going to keep reading your story so when I reach the end I'll review again and tell you what I thought of the whole thing, but for now it ROCKS!! |
| Utada Kumi 2005-01-04 ch 10, | abuseGreat story! ^^ I had actually read this a long time ago and came back to read it again. Good job. |
| EverShadow 2004-08-20 ch 10, | abuseCome on, that can't be it! There could be so much more!! Further their relationship! Give us more romance. Send them on another adventure. Maybe someone Paine knows is still alive!! Let there be action, romance, adventure but don't let that be it. Please? EverShadow signing off. |
| IrishSmurph 2004-08-20 ch 10, | abuseAww, it's just filled with cuteness. I think you should have in the next chapter them going to visit Yuna, or something. You're an awesome writer, great job. |
| Zero-Vision 2004-08-10 ch 10, | abuseaww, cute |
| StaciaAndAriesMcDohl 2004-07-27 ch 10, | abuseI think you should absolutely put up a "coming out" chapter, I think that would finish this beautiful perfectly. You are an amazing writer and even though I don't know you, I can tell you're an amazing person. I'm looking foreward to more of your writing. I wish you the best of luck in everything you do. Lots of love from your newest fan, --Aries McDohl |
| StaciaAndAriesMcDohl 2004-07-27 ch 9, | abuseWow... that's all I can say... wow. |
| StaciaAndAriesMcDohl 2004-07-27 ch 8, | abuseA nice little twist, I like it. |