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luna-magic-2005 2008-10-26 . chapter 3
Oh, this story was just so cute, so beautiful, and yet so sad. Poor Kyo-kun...
Nix Wolfwood 2007-11-04 . chapter 3
I really liked that story. I think you did a great job at keeping those two in character. Thank you for posting that. It's definitely a favorite of mine now.
naruhinafan2010 2007-09-11 . chapter 3
That was really good! You wrote them almost perfectly, and you definitely captured their personalities and their intereactions with each other. I do wish you'd write more, though. P.S. Have you read the manga? If so, I would really appreciate it if you could tell me the ending!! (Ah I can't stand it anymore, I have to know!)
lauren 2007-08-11 . chapter 3
omg that waz so cute! i didn't see any mistakes o nothin so it was good but i wish you wouldnt stop rightin
LSR-7 2007-07-30 . chapter 1
Well, I don't know what will happen at the end of this story, but I know they have a happy ending at the end of the manga. :-)
You have captured their characters very well.
cali-gloria 2007-07-23 . chapter 3
i loved this story it's so sweet and fluffy. automatic fave! here's a dough nut ( takes a dough nut and shoves it down your throat) enjoy!
Super-Kyo 2007-07-03 . chapter 2
Aw! I liked the ending of this chapter more then the beginning! AW KYO! AW
Super-Kyo 2007-07-03 . chapter 1
LOL!! Thats awsome!!
CaptainCarrotCactus 2007-06-07 . chapter 3
So i know this is a pretty old fic, but i just read it know and just wanted to say that it was super good!
Geredian Knight Rhiannon 2007-05-04 . chapter 3
thats so sad really it is, but I read all of the fruit basket books already, yeah and I'm so happy like this dosen't happen in the book that would make the readers so sad.
But I like what you written it's good
music.my.paramour 2007-03-02 . chapter 3
I LOVED it...lol..[[just wanted to write that, because its true]] Anywayz this was wonderful..wish there was more.

Can't wait to read your other fics...
Flying Fishstick 2007-01-10 . chapter 3
Aw. Great story.

They were both kept pretty in-character...and the cat's names. X_X Those were cute.

*faves*
Dark'sangel and Haru'srooster 2006-12-02 . chapter 3
so umm yea i really liked your story, but i want the url to the one or version thingy watever tat isnt edited, pretty pretty please and thank you!
BOO! 2006-11-15 . chapter 3
for ur information tohru doesn't have brown eyes she has blue which is kinda weird but tis the truth
BOO! 2006-11-15 . chapter 1
"You didn’t have to come up here with me, you know." Kyo told himself that he was grabbing her hand only to keep her from falling on the uneven path through the lightly wooded area. He most certainly wasn’t enjoying the feel of her slender fingers enclosed in his well-used ones.

great sarcasim... lol
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