Lovely.

Oh. Beautiful.

Love it~
Sirius and Remus BELONG together! This fic was cute, are you gonna do more fics with this pairing? I hope so!

Awe! Young stubborn Sirius is really cute. Lol. I love this. Its adorable.

Great title. Adorable story. Your style of writing is fantastically unique.

Aw! It's so cute! Loved the title...

This was the most ADORABLE SBRL fic I've read so far! Awesome-tastic job! Thanks for writing!
~Latni-chan~

Beautiful. Absolutely loved this. Loved the ending sentence. Brilliant. Great job.

I love love love this

Gorgeous, wonderful, especially since it was written so long ago and presumably before we came to know more about the angty-ness of Remus' werewolf stuff. Loved it.

That was lovely in all sense of the word. Perhaps it was long, but it was brilliant and I love how it comes to a full circle with the hand and the burning and the bandaging and the not his fault and the which hand. Beautiful.

Sweet story.

Great job with this - it has really smooth transitions.

I came here to read this thanks to a recommendation by Wuff in The Moony and Padfoot Parlour forum here:
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This is a lovely story. The format is unique. There were os many beautiful passages but I must say that I especially loved these:
Sirius nods. He doesn’t understand all the words, but the meaning is clear enough. He walks the endless way across his father’s study, past rustling bookcases that his little hands, burned though they are, itch to get ahold of. In those bookcases is the knowing that his father has, and Sirius has not. They both know there is power in this knowing.
And these:
And Remus finds himself telling Sirius. That scents are almost like colors, and so the world is always a kaleidoscope of smell and memory and beauty. That changing form through pain and becoming a nightmare means that every dark thing about him is bared every month; he has faced his demons and made peace with them, something most people will never do. That howling is singing, and that three years ago he made a promise to his mother, and that, even wolf-shaped, he remembers this, and so he sings her songs.

wow that was just..wow. amazing. your such a good writer! i love how you ended it on a happy note, before the whole disaster with the secret keepers and such. also having it switch POVs between years was really great. it was so cute and i loved the way you included their childhoods. by the way though, sirius' parents are named walburga (mother) and orion (father) black. amazing though, best fic i've read in a while! keep up the great work.