Nice job! I love the dynamic you have going between the characters. Kirika sees Mireille as a friend, Chloe sees Kirika as a past/future lover and Mireille sees Chloe as a kid who's after what she wants. Makes for interesting reading fo' sure.

I like the story alot, ever going to finish it?

O! That was so col! XD You rock! I'm gonna read the whole thing! XD I swear!

you definetly are a great Author ...I like the way you write , plus your detailed explanations of the thoughts ,emotions and actions of each character ... I hope you'll update it again ,...t'would be sad if the story stops here ...,so go on n I will review it again

promise...

This has to be one of the greatest fics I've ever read. Your write lovely and the way you go into decribe the characters emotions oh my god just plz update soon.

WHHOHHO
you updated! yay!
*throws sugar and happy thought*

Good chapter. Please continue! ^_^

w00t! You actually updated after all this time! OMG, I've waited so long to see any Noir fics that I like actually get updated since most have been dead for months.Thank you SO MUCH for continuing this fic. It was good btw!
Update soon, ya hear? :P

HEY!! I love your fic!! I recently watched all 26 episodes of Noir... and the ending left me wishing for an alternate ending where Chloe could live and Kirika and her become the True Noir. *sigh* I dunno what would be done with Mireille... its not that I hate her, I just think the True Noir duo and the blinded-by-darkness Kirika were so much cooler. ^_^

Er anyways, back to your fic. Uh I liked how you kept the citrus-y part simple and undetailed. I'm not a big yuri fan, but I'm a fan of strong friendships and bonds. :P
But for some reason, this series draws me to the KxC pairing. Weird.

Anyhoo, I hope you enjoyed reading my rather long review. Also, I do hope you update soon! I'll smack you if you don't! XD

I want a update. It's really good. keep writing.

I am a totl fan of your stories. I love the way you write them. Keep on writing 'cause I wanna find out what happens.

Hey Zelas,

You're doing a great job, and Mireille is at last getting what she deserves (sorry Mireille...you're cuten but...well, compared to Chloe...nc). I just wanted to review to tell you (that your story is totally cool but I said it already) that I heard an interview or something in a french tv show (I'm French by the way, but you still can do whatever you want with Mireille, you have my blessing) and one member of the Japanese team of Noir said that Mireille was 19 and Kirika 17 (or 16 I can't remember well but I think it was 17), so basically Chloé shoud be 16, so Kirika's not such a bad pedophile (in fact she isn't a pedophile at all since they were both under 18 when the scene of your flashback happened, according to the French, Spanish or Japanese -whatever- legislation...oh well, anyway they don't care that much about law).

That's it, I stop bothering you, and keep going ! (but please, could you update a little bit faster...I know, waiting is part of the reader's job, but...well, that's my prayer).

well well an exelent piece of work ,after all I'd read many ffs of Noir ..hn just read It seems that the whole world is an Mireille and Kirika Fan even if Chloe should die in it ,too. I think I might still like it (ok to be honest kill Mireille , you ask why? cause I like Chloe more :? ) this the first time I ever reviewed a ff ,feel proud for it. keep on the work

ah Update!
Well the Chapter title fits ^_^

"Maybe, one day Kirika, you’ll remember that, too"
Do you think Chloe and Kirika whould've done something like that? I mean they were very young...so experiences like that would've been more...innocent ...paradox huh?

Anyways...great chapter!

Sometimes you read things so delicious and rare (like a good t-bone steak!) that you have to read and reread them over and over. Chloe's flashback was one of those. :)

Yay, more Althena coming up.