I liked it. Keep up the good work. I'll check back on it. :)

Very interesting, can't wait to read more.
One flaw though, it's a pitty that you didn't take the necessary time to check the spelling on the summary, the rest of the story is very well written, presentation is everything my dear, please double check the summary and avoid saying things like 'I suck at summaries', I think the phrase you used for the summary was pretty good, never undervalue yourself or your story!
Take care, Sally