I had to stop reading. What is up with you and pregnant people and dying. Livin up the story. PLEASE! Same for the spelling.

Lol. I'm sorry, but you can't be serious. This isn't a story anymore than it is a screenplay. There's no descripton, no quotes ("), nothing but a lot of useless letters and colons and...to be frank, crap. I really am sorry...I don't want to be mean. I would suggest that you go back, revise, get a beta reader, and add some more emotion. For example...
"S: NO! Starts to cry
A: it ill be all right Simon"
Instead of that, you could say:
"No," Simon choked out, tears welling in his eyes and spilling down his face.
Annie held her son for a moment, then assured him, "I'll be all right, Simon."
That would be my suggestion. I didn't want to bring you down and not give you suggestions on how to improve. Good luck.

Gosh, why don't the reviewers just be nice about telling the writer how to fix the story instead of being so mean!!
Let me show you MEAN reviewers how to do this:
Read other stories to see how they do it and maybe you can do it how they do it since it's a little better. Go into microsoft word and write it out and when you get to three pages, start a new document and save the one you are done with. Then the one you are working on now is chapter 2.
Get it?

Whoa. This was... really bad, to be blunt. There was terrible spelling, and... it was really bad.
So bad it was funny, actually. My favorite part was when Simon decides to go "convert" Cecelia.

Oh, wow. Wow, wow, wow.
Congratulations, you have offically made me wish I never watched 7th Heaven. Your story was...scary. First off, you don't identify who "S" is or any other characters for that matter. And your spelling. Oh dear God, that was some of the worst bloody spelling I have ever seen. Please, run it through Microsoft Word, and your screen will fill with mistakes. Please, too, learn about pregnacy. Get the facts straight before you EVER have children. And before you EVER decide to disgrace 7th Heaven fan fiction with your writing, at least have the decency to not.

Good story , but next time watch your spelling