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Ryocha 2006-11-12 . chapter 1
As much as I would love to say this was half-arsed, it wasn't. xD

Watase focused too much on their "relationship", as over-rated and annoying as it was, and never got to really develop the other characters because of this. I mean, they practically got hitched within the first ten episodes and they were saying "I love you" in the early teens.

All in all, you summarized their relationship and made it seem fake, which it was in the series. Good going!
DPFYLUVR 2006-07-18 . chapter 1
Hahaha that is funny as hell
faustine 2006-06-09 . chapter 1
very funny:)
Swirly 2006-04-01 . chapter 1
So true... -_-; LOL
peacefull havoc 2005-10-10 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!this IS funny!(fixing my composure)But realy you screwed up the sentementall love and tenderness of devotion and passion that we all have grown to love.I realy like it when theyr all'i love you' 'no i love you'and they hold hends and smooch!But it is preety damn funny.But still!
Misura 2005-04-14 . chapter 1
Sadly, I think you're not bashing *anyone* in this. Because, you know, things actually *happen* the way you summarized them, in a nutshell. >.< Which meant, of course, that this was a lot of fun to read. ^-^
chichiri-4-ever 2004-08-26 . chapter 1
VERY FUNNY! I LOVE IT!
ChaosLydia 2004-08-06 . chapter 1
I love this story! miaka and tamahome are my least favorite characters and a good bashing is always fun. I love the "am I drunk enough... sure!" part! **flops over laughing again** That was classic! I also wanted to say thanks for reading my story as well...

man... **reads story again** LOL! keep up the good work!
Lady Aescwyn 2004-07-26 . chapter 1
LUVED IT!
spawn_of_da_nite 2004-06-16 . chapter 1
quote from 'Harry Potter and the Prizoner of Askabam...' Not good...Brilliant! wahahha!
Crescendoll 2004-06-10 . chapter 1
LMFAO! YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE OF THESE I LOVE YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR!!
Twilight Sky 2004-05-30 . chapter 1
Ak, gomen ne, but I really didn't like this. I'm sorry; it's just that you overrated things way too much. I hate that you don't consider their real feelings toward each other when they said those things.
~Twilight Sky
Sleepy Tuna Fish 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
that's funny! i just recently got into fushigi yuugi. this is really good. but i haven't seen anything past episode 21!! *cries*
Rissi-Sama 2004-01-31 . chapter 1
Brilliant!
Albur Lily 2004-01-27 . chapter 1
Oh god that is so right. Yu Watase, I love you and all for creating FY... but seriously, do you really think that Miaka and Tamahome's portrayal of true love is what happens in reality? *pukes over the slushiness of it all*
This sums their whole relationship up from beginning to end.
Thankyou for giving me a moments laughter.
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