WRITE MORE PLEASE

wow... but REALLY good grammar. awesome grammar. but maybe lisa did it on purpose...?

My problem with this story isn't the whole elbow thing, it's that apparently an SMS cheerleader is moonlighting as a fortune teller.

Good, keep going

aww tht is so sad poor jessi

Not the worst fic I've ever read, but it lacks substance. There isn't really much of anything to it.

If that's it, you've got a lot of holes to fill. Why was the fortune teller having the same name as the cheerleader? Also, as a ballet dancer myself, I know that while ballet might be harder with that particular injury, I would certainly be possible. Also, though everyone (basically) else has put this, remember what she calls her parents.
Otherwise, I know how I would feel if this happened to me, and I can tell you that this would have meaning to me.

OMG! I almost cried! You can't leave your adoring readers hanging, plz put up a new chapter soon!

This is pretty good in terms of plot and storyline, but you've got lot's of spelling mistakes, and some strange reasoning for her not being able to do ballet.

I'm not a cheerleader or balletdancer, but I know quite well that an arm injury would not affect being able to dance unless it was paralysed. Make it an ankle injury or something like that. Oh i don't think they would throw you THAT high.

Also, why does the fortune teller have the same name as the cheerleader? And, I don't consider you a BSC fan, because if you were one, you would have read enough to know that Jessi calls her mother 'mama' and her father "daddy'.

Please improve on it.

That could've been really good, and it wasn't bad, but being a cheerleader, I know that you never just throw a person randomly into the air, even for practise, and you NEVER freak out in the air. You don't even know if you're going to be dropped, or not caught until you actually do, or are not. Oh, and being a BSC fan, I also know that she calls her dad Daddy, and her mom Mamma.

Um, how is a pain in the elbow meant to effect her ballet?

I love te story so far. But you should defiately continue it asap! Jessi has alwasy been my favorite along with Mallory and I thnk she dosen't get enough credit. So I hope you finish it soon and I hope it turns out best for Jessi. Good luck!

Umm...how would breaking her arm cause her to never be able to dance? It's not like it's her leg or something. I'm sorry, but this story was horrible.

Why did you stop? That was great!

I suspected she was going to break some bone. I happened to like this little story very much.