Totally need to write Mothers for Dummies 2.0 I want to see what happens next. _

Ordeysia/Wendy Raimi

That was absolutley incredible! I adored the plot and the writing was just...wow! Contrary to most of the other reviews you've recieved, I thought you had Owen and Xanatos in character very well! And the drinking thing, that, I thought, added to the character's and gave them a more adult twist! Well, again, awesome job! I throughly enjoyed reading this!

yes, a very good idea. though i have trouble imagining Puck openly crying to ANYONE. still it's an excellent story. keep writing.

I liked how you really got into everyone's heads. Funniest of all was at the end; somehow Peter Pan's "Please, Wendy lady, be our mother" poppped into my head :D The only problem was Owen and Xanatos. They're very eloquent and chilvalric; no slang or booze! It threw the story off-kilter a bit. Other than that, nice idea.

Hey, this was GREAT!

This story was great! I really enjoyed it! I hope to read more on the subject in the future!

A very enjoyable story, but Owen and David are very out of character.

I just freaked out. Owen is a few. I love it okay.