*sniffles complacently* I can’t really get past the imagery of a deserted Domino. I liked the whole twisted metal and glinting glass line. Very pretty. I’ve always loved your portrayals of Dark Bakura, but you know that. I can just picture Dark Bakura sitting on top of a dead skyscraper during sunset with this small smirk on his face…perfect. Just perfect. Him watching the sun wither away and all that rot. But that’s the point of a story, yes? To leave lingering imagery for the reader? Well, you always manage some of the more poetic scenes for us, so be proud. *grins*

~Artemis Z.

P.S. – Sorry for the fragments. You know I love them. *smirk*

Wow! Thats the best portrayal of Yami no Bakura i've ever seen. You've done an excillent job and you should probably go pro with your talent. You must write more! I cant get enough of your work!

watch me be too lazy to log in...
heh. groovy fic! i think i commented on it on lj but i felt like leaving a review here, too.
~Sam

A most interesting and slightly disturbing read (because, well, Yami no Bakura's a pretty disturbing person ^^;). I like the way you wrote his personality, his passions, his motivations ... they all fit him perfectly, making this a very realistic look inside the mind of a quite scary person. *shivers*

Great story! What an interesting view of Yami B's motives. You even used a quote from Nietzsche at the beginning! I love Nietzsche's work; that was cool! But, you used the word 'ignominious', a form of 'ignominy', and a crime in my book. (Ever read Nathaniel Hawthorne's "The Scarlet Letter"? That is the reason I hate this word. Dear god, the man used it in every paragraph. UNFORGIVABLE!) But this story was so awesome, well written and intriguing, but it can only be a one-shot. Great job, keep up the fantastic work!

What a wonderful, extremely unique view on Bakura. I love it! ^__^