i hope you don't think this story is bad cause its really good

ch.3! write ch.3

Please write ch.3 and 4 I really won't to read it! PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE ! YOURFIC.ISALSOMEREALLYGOODBETTERTHEN.ALMOST!

please write ch.3 and on please

please write a ch.3456789

please write ch.345678910 lemon

damn update this story really soon
also please e-mail me when you update

I completely agree with the review by Vegeta's true love! Racism ppl r such bitches! As soon as I saw 'shes a white girl yadaddada' or wateva the shit u said i was like THIS GIRL IS RACIST! I'm not even givin this story a chance. Bet it sucks anyway. I have tons of african-american friends... i will never say the 'b-word'! Overall all racism bitches can go to HELL!

(:(:Aww man. I thought this would be in the REAL ghetto, but Queenz aint tha Ghetto. Trust me man, I live in Jamaica Queens, it aint that bad here. And they right, Pan aint white. Is that how it iz in yo neighborhood? Cause in mine we got EVERYONE: Indians, Spanish, Haitians, Blacks, Whites. And we all get along great, not no prejudice stuff. I just dont like the dissin where i live, other than that its good. :):)

Holla back. This fic is off da hook. I wanted 2 do a fic like this but it seemed mad Brooklyn when i started writing it. i got nuthin against Bk cuz tht's where most of my fam is from, but tht's wut it sounded like. i may do 1 of these or put u in my fic if u want. keep up the the good work cuz das wussup.

i love it!!

This story is deplorable and lacks any real content. I reported for misplaced rating for drug abuse, language, and racial content. If anyone else is offended, you should do the same. Have fun.

This is pretty funny!

Hey, this is a pretty good story, sounds like Save the Last Dance though. But, it might make people uncomfortable that you're saying nigga a lot and making it seem like blacks are bad. So you might want to change a few things, but it's your story and you can do what you want. But, yeah. Other it's pretty good.

iz hottz...i lyk it hurry wid da up-date