didnt see it comin lol, hope that theres another chapter on the way, seems you really know the characters

hey, cool story! keeps you interested certainly and cant wait to hear whats happened. keep writin

*sniffles* Sad chappys... Keep it up though!
Hermy deserves a happier future and thats just what your going to do, right? ^_^

This story seems to be going somewhere :-)
Please continue I'm hooked.

Please update soon it's really good!! :)

Hm, interesting. Although, Ron should see Hermione THROUGH his own eyes rather than threw his own eyes, and I'm fairly sure she lives in a two-story house, not a two-STOREY house.

Great start! Am looking forward to another chap!

cool stroy keep it coming!

Love the beginning. What's going on I wonder. Can't wait till we see some Snape action.
snapes faery

oh ... very interesting. great start!
~lizzie