I like it. More, please!

You write very well. Are there going to be any of the characters from the book in this?

" . . . unaroused power . . ."

I lol'd xD

i just wanted to let u know that i'll be adding your story(s) to the C2 community that i've justset up. if it isn't ok with you, can you just let me know? thanks!

YAY! Finally, someone has actually written a Deep Secret fic! Thankies! Why the heck does everyone insist on writing Chrestomanci fic's? WHY?

Hooray! Someone's written a Deep Secret fic! Keep going!

Awesome job on this story! I have no critique except for that FF.net standard: UPDATE! Diana Wynne Jones is a great author, and this fic does her remarkable justice. Very nice. Please continue!