   Flame Ivy Moon 2005-01-25 . chapter 11I love it please up date asap! |
 jster1983 2004-11-18 . chapter 11 Darien and Roselia. I actually didn't see that coming. |
| jster1983 2004-06-17 . chapter 10 I have an idea you ever see the advanced series? You should have someone capture a Sableeye and use it to scare the meatball shaped pigtails off of Serena. It should either be Raye, Darien, Rini, or Sammy because those 4 love to pick fights with her although Darien had stopped doing that when they started going steady. |
| jster1983 2004-06-11 . chapter 10 Sammy gets a Pokemon Too? Cool I wonder if you are going to make them all battle each other as that would be so cool. |
 Silently.Lost 2004-02-08 . chapter 10great sotry so far hope the next chapter is up soon ^-^ |
| fee 2004-01-24 . chapter 4 You have Chapter 1-3 mixed in with chapter 4 on THIS link, along with Chapter's 5-7 |
 mystlady 2001-09-22 . chapter 9Good, I'm hoping for more!! |
| UMBREON 2001-07-15 . chapter 9 a good story i hope you continue it soon |
| DragonSlayer 2001-06-10 . chapter 9 It was good. Needs more details though. You rush threw everything. Plz right more. |
| Rusty, The Anime-Niac 2001-06-04 . chapter 9 The writing could use some work... but otherwise this is interesting. I am hoping that something to advance the plot will happen soon, otherwise this story is going nowhere. Keep up the good work! |
| Star Mystic 2001-03-29 . chapter 1 Great story. Keep up the good work! This story doesn't have grammar problems believe me! |
| Shi no Hime 2001-03-26 . chapter 8 One word: SCARY |
| Chibi-chan v2.5 2001-03-21 . chapter 8 This was great! *wink* but it's Misty, not Missy ^^ hehehe just like to tell you that |
| Jordan 2001-03-20 . chapter 8 MOre please |
| Moonlight Pilot 2001-03-20 . chapter 8 This a great story |
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