Wow, a rare gem, A Mary-Sue story with plot.
Hard to find and worth it's weight in gold pressed latinum.
Hope you haven't stopped it just because Anubis' fate has already been decided. just make it AU.

This is getting really good! Can't wait to see what happens with Maj. Davis; he's one of my favorite guest characters on the show. I'm so glad he's figuring prominently in this story, almost as happy as I am about the S/D action :)

The story is going good so far...I can't wait to read more...

Yay! Looks like the beginnings of another great S/D fic from you :) The mysterious parchment is all very interesting, but get back to the S/D smoochies soon! Seriously, I can't wait to read more.

Interesting start.

Nice!!