   earlschibiangel 2007-10-28 . chapter 2I love it! Can't wait for more! |
 remix-69er 2004-07-14 . chapter 2aw,soo kawaii please update real soon! |
| Ruki The Sake Fairy 2004-02-23 . chapter 2 CUTE! get the next chappy out soon okay!? |
| QAM-Stu 2004-02-10 . chapter 2 great tension! keep up the good work! |
 Mrs. Trunks Briefs 2004-02-10 . chapter 2FINISH!!...FINISH!! its soo good! |
| ccfleursdelys 2004-02-06 . chapter 2 great great great story!
when the next chapter? |
| Mrs. Trunks Briefs 2004-01-30 . chapter 1 aww... thats sad! vegita shouldnt be such a jerk though! |
| draegon-fire 2004-01-28 . chapter 1 This chapter was really good. Oh, so you know it's spelled Kakkarot. I like how Vegeta's nice one minute and rude the next. He's very complex so of course he'll act that way. |
 Twinstar1 2004-01-27 . chapter 1Hey,
Good story so far. I think it has some potential. I think you need to work a bit on the spelling and check over some of the words before posting it. I do like it though. I can't wait to see what you write next. Keep it up!!
P.S. It's spelled Kakkarot(well, some people spell it with one "k") and Yamcha ^.~ |
| nikki 2004-01-27 . chapter 1 nice start! it sounds promising and seems to me this has great potential:) so plz write more soon. look forwrd to reading more ! smile :) nikki |
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