hey the storys nice.. but then the endings sorta weak.. i mean he just did the iron reaver soul stealer and kikyo died? i think its gonna take alot more then that to make her dead..

I really like this a lot.

I luved it! You really have a gift for a first try :)

OK,i like ur fics. the roc! but work on ur endings,they kinda are sappy and rushed. Don't take it peronaly,just a little corrective critisim!

OMG! it's me again,so just F.W.I. ur fics. so don't suck! I duno wut ur friends say but they are really good! check out mine?

thats really good :-D the end made me smile

wow...very very good! :)

good...it went by a little too fast though. a tip: drag things out a little longer, and you'll get more peoples attention. i liked it and all, but _not offense- you really need to practic somemore. i mean, i practiced writing, before i posted my story. so should you.

i love it...great story!

does kagomes mom figure out that inuyashas friend i her daughter? i hope not

Well that was sort of abrupt and what exactly does Inuyasha plan to do? dun dun dun! Have fun writing the next chappie!

Yo dude do how's Inu dude going to react. hm. I am intrigued. PWEASE!! :)

this story is so sad, i know someone who does that to themselves, so sad...

It's a nice premise, though a tad cliche
Some grammer notes:
1. A new paragraph starts every time another speaker talks.
2. Lists (like this one, or the grades) should have each item on a seperate line
3. The dividers arn't really needed at all. The story works just as well without them.

wow, I never would have thought Kagome would do something like that. please continue~