An excellent start and excellent characterisations! I really enjoyed the interplay between Minerva and Remus, you must update soon! Please! lol
If I have one nit to pick, it's that Remus and Minerva's age differences have been condensed, but i don't really care, it works as a piece of fiction!
Looking forward to the next installment!
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*In Snape-like dangerous whisper*"What are you doing?"

Honestly, I read this fic some time ago and you STILL haven't updated! Of course, I didn't have the heart to review back then...^^

...Please... I... it's so sweet and Remus is just so charming! Please hurry!

Wow...this is so good! I'd have to say it is one of the best RL/MM fictions I've ever read. I do hope that you will update ASAP!

Hey, that was a really wonderful story,I can't wait to see more, your a really gifted writer. Congratulations :)*thumbs up*

Good story so far. Hope you write more soon.
I've alwasy liked Remus and Minerva as a couple.

Yay! ha, I hadn't realized how much I missed your writing. :-D Yay for R/M!

It was HORRIBLE! I HATED it! Absolutely DREADFUL! ... *in weird Lieberman voice* J/K! I got you good that time, didn't I, Scott?
Hehe, yes, I know I'm a weirdo. Absolutely wonderful! Write more, and SOON, or else I'll send Teddy out on you! Plus, you owe me for giving you that history packet! So WRITE MORE NOW!

It's great to see you're finally writing RL/MM again! And such wonderfully long chapters too! Please update ASAP! You've got a good idea going here. I love the tender relationship you always portray between Remus and Minerva. I can't wait!
>^-^< (meow!)

Love it, dahling! You've set up their dynamics well.

This is fab - I love the way you portray Lupin pre-Hogwarts
post again soon
Linds

Yeah! Great! Lookin' forward to e next chapter. By the way- don't smash the computer, it's such a shame and this is just lovely :).

*big thumbs up*
Looking forward to chapter 1!

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Hey there!! This is an excellent beginning to what I'm sure will be a great story! I particularly liked your opening with the Daily Prophet article - nicely written and a great way to draw in your reader. I'm excited to see where this fic is headed!

This looks like it's going to be great - can't wait for more.
Post again soon
Linds