nice chapter

Simon says that was horrible. ;P Just kidding! I loved it! I loved it! Very good!
The ending was wonderful! *Bestows a gift of Cadbury Chocolate Creme Eggs.* Laters!

Spike-person never struck me as being as naive as he seems up to this point, but other than that I love your story so far and can't wait for the rest of it. Keep up the good work.

Yay! You updated! This is getting good! More please!

Thanx for making Ed wear an Aerosmith shirt. They're, like, my fave band ever!! This story rox! Thanx for making Ed older!!

I thought this story was real cool, I love it. Everyone seems to be in character well, all grown up, especially how Ed can be serious, yet still her playful self, and Spike is still hilarious and cool. I hope to see more faye and Jet though, they can't just die off. and I like the Miggs concepts, good work, that it is.

I thought Ed would end up with Spike. But this is still a great story.

i really like it...keep up the good work

i wuv it!

Aw, poor Miggs...that is way too sad. I hope she can get over it and realise Spike killed Vicious because he had no choice. Miggs'll find out about what Vicious did sooner or later...poor girl.
And Ed. Poor, disfunctional Ed. Still, I guess with Spike as a roll model it's not that hard to see how she's going to turn out. At least she has a good heart, eh?
Spike is back and it makes me dance with happieness! I love my Spike, and I love this story. It's turning out so well, I wait for updates faithfully because school sucks and I have no life.
But your story is excellent, and I enjoy reading it. Thank you for taking the time to write it!
Sanima

its pretty good so far...it makes sense...all the pieces fit and all. I like the story idea. >cicles and eyeballs...circles are pretty...a taste thats wonderful...just like refried beans!

This is good, I want to see what happens next.

Good idea, lookin forwad to seein more of. Seems we have a similar taste in titles

yay!!
this story officially rocks, and i love the plot idea. only now you have to update regularly

O.O
Ek, I am all overwhelmed and stuff at how this is beginning...this is like, wow. Totally amazing. I've never seen anything so well written start out with such a bang, usually it's either warming up to the topic or it's just really poorly written, i.e. Ed was a bounty hunter and she lived with a mechanic *insert short dialoge here* and Spike was really alive and Ed found him and she was all "wow"*end* or something like that. Truely, I can't wait for this to update, I think I've seen two Ed/Spike so far, and I can't say for sure, but this one looks as good, or better. Please update at your earliest convienience, because this is way too friggen awsome to wait long for >.