that was so sad! :,(

oh you crazy australian-english people and your amazing vocabularies... *sigh* well, that was a fantastic one-shot, i hope you write more like these.

... ~Cries~ Oh it was so good and sad and sketchy and hard to understand but so well written!

"The harpoon is released and his heart is pierced so quickly it doesn’t register. It’s only when his blood runs cold and his mind freezes that he knows things are over."
What a way with words, dude.

This is well done - especially considering how long you spent on it. Keep up the good work. Hope you'll take a look at my fics as well.

Hello. I am Headmaster Cromwell of the Salem Institute of Magical Crafts, a Harry Potter roleplaying site looking for dedicated, creative writers. Students and Staff are both currently being accepted, so please come over and visit the site; I hope you will think about submitting an application.
The address is:
http://w.geocities.com/headmaster_cromwell/
The address to the Velvet Hall is:
http://disc.server.com/Indices/208060.html
I hope you'll come check it out. :)
Cheers!
Headmaster William Cromwell

Gah, that's sad, but you did a good job. This is nicely written. ^^