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threeaquila
2008-06-16
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat fic
matches the song really well!
moonlit-shadow0x
2005-05-11
ch 1,
abuseOh that was really good. That's how I've always pictured Draco too- Started off bad to please his father but then somehow, sometime turns good. (Putting it in simple terms, anyway ;)

Anyway, I really liked the ending and thought it was really meaningful :)

It was a very worthwhile read!

Shadow
Lkjhgfdsa
2004-09-11
ch 1,
abuse"17 year old Draco Malfoy is one of the hottest guys in Hogwarts. In fact, if Harry Potter was finished off by Voldemort instead of vice-versa, he probably will be the most eligible bachelor in all of England."

GREAT line. Only one problem (which I hardly noticed - ignore me if you wish) 'if Harry Potter WAS finished-'. Shouldn't the 'was' be replaced by 'had been'? Or maybe I'm just delusional about the tenses... ~_~

My best friend adores Simple Plan. I think I shall go drool after them too...
Rider-of-Rohan23
2004-07-20
ch 1,
abuseHardly canon, yet I liked it. :) You really like the Draco, non? lol. I like the story line, and the song (which I love) fits beautifully. I've been inspired to go write a Malfoy ficlet...
**skips away humming**
*(*Austin
Lil' Eowyn
2004-06-09
ch 1,
abuseHey! God I hope I went to the right place. Anyway. I loved it! Poor ickle draco... but i'd wipe away any tears he has... any day. you gotta love that boy. Well I said most of the things I want to say in my thnak you in chapter ten... so yeah... great work! I loved it. talk to ya later.

Luv

Lil' Eowyn
Inylan Ledding
2004-06-05
ch 1,
abuseI like it! It gives the twist that I think we'll see in Draco, the change from cold-hearted brute to the vulnerable, oh-so-sexy sex god, I mean, caring person, he is. :)

Poor kid... I'd hate to have his life... wouldn't mind comforting him though!
Sakura Conner
2004-03-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it. I think you should keep writing, and upload the stories you don't think are worth uploading anyway.
Love always,
Sakura Conner
Amberdulen
2004-01-31
ch 1,
abuse"It's not slash green people!" Did you just call us green people?!?
Wow ... reading bedtime stories and killing Muggles. Bipolar!Lucius.
Not as bad as you thought it was. :-) Write on!
~*Ari*~
2004-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abusepoor draco! lovely draco... lovely lovely draco... i am obsessed with draco... anyways, good story! and sry, i can't help you with the formating... i get confused by it too. its rather anoying... write more!
~*Ari*~
Headmaster Cromwell
2004-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseHello. I am Headmaster Cromwell of the Salem Institute of Magical Crafts, a Harry Potter roleplaying site looking for dedicated, creative writers. Students and Staff are both currently being accepted, so please come over and visit the site; I hope you will think about submitting an application.
The address is:
http://w.geocities.com/headmaster_cromwell/
The address to the Velvet Hall is:
http://disc.server.com/Indices/208060.html
I hope you'll come check it out. :)
Cheers!
Headmaster William Cromwell
SubliminalMsgs
2004-01-27
ch 1,
abuseit actually wasnt all that bad. really. dont be so ** urself. ive read alot of songfics for this song, and this was one of the good ones.
about the formatting, if ur using Microsoft Word, click on "save as html" instead of "save as". it should work. dont worry, i had major problems w/ that too. if u read the first chaps of my fics, theyre all screwed up and busted.
Voldie on Varsity Track
2004-01-27
ch 1,
abuse^_^
I love Simple Plan...but I love Orli Bloom more! ^_^
Write some more fics! You're a good writer.
~Christie~
mya14
2004-01-27
ch 1,
abusenice concept... i love that song~ anyway, i saw few grammatical errors but its okay... the fic was still understandable.. :] well, other than that, nice job! keep on writing.. nice plot.
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