(Blinks twice then falls to the ground, clutching ribs and laughing hard) FUNNY! POWER TO THE RANDOM GUYS! BTW, I never did notice that Kaiba and Raven look alike...

Good job! Yay! Happy Birthday...can't talk...in L.A...
Seeky

I'll send you a *sort of* happy birthday um, wish, 'cause you only had 2 out of my 5 fav. yu-gi-oh characters. You had Ryou and Bakura, that's good, but you didn't have Anzu(Tea) Malik, or Marik! WHY?? ANZU'S SO CUTE, AND MALIK AND MARIK ARE HOT, AND EVILNESS IS COOL!

That was so funny! (Falls out of the computer chair laughing.) Ouch! That really hurt! Well like I was saying, Your story is great!