Nice. All too often, fanfictioneers are so wrapped up in getting Cho and Harry together that they forget she has a lot of healing to do ... Write on.

this is beautiful...btoh story and poem. And I love Cho/Cedric fics, and this was the coolest yet! but...Ced is ONE year older than her...in 6th year. In GoF, before Harry is talking to him about the dragons, it says, "[Cedric] was with a load of 6th year friends". He might have been the oldest 6th year, b/c of his bday. good work! i looovvee cho/ced fics...more?? *smiles*

yea! i like cho/ced fics, and this was good! but cho and cedric are only ONE year apart! ([ced] was with a load of 6th year friends in GoF..this is before Harry splits his bag and tells him about hte dragons) I think his bday is early....so that's why he's 17 in 6th yr.

::sob:: Oh, man! Now you've made my muse want to write a Cho ficcy...

Oh, this is so beautiful, and so sad. This is the type of emotional writing I will never accomplish, and i have to admit i'm a bit jealous. :) Why do you have only one HP story?

Oooh... sweet! *grins* That was really, really nice. Great job! Really... this was really good. Hmmm... I'll consider it for my site. Your poetry is exellent. :) (just a side note on the SoE: Eliza was trying to impress Draco in chapter three. You'll notice she never volunteered to demonstrate. And Wyrren is a character I never meant to create).

*claps wildly* Oh that was great! I couldn't write poetry to save my life! So, I admire anyone that can! (I think I'll stay to fics...) Beautifully executed! You introduced it with a fantastic monologue, and then ended with an even more amazing poem! Bravo! :-) Caitlyn

It's beautiful! I love it!

Oh...my...god...thats so GOOD!! You almost had me crying there!!! :(

Wow. That's beautiful. I love the poem - it fits the story to perfection. It's sad - and it mirrors the sadness and reflects it back - what am I talking about? ::sigh:: I loved it, anyway.

This is a great story/poem. Better than any i have ever written.(then again mine might very well suck-_-)But i reccomend this to anyone who likes harry potter, and gets into that love stuff. :-)