Cute fic, but I don't think it was all too realistic. Lyta shouldn't even be able to speak English since it's not what was used in anchient egypt. Her speech is also a bit odd. She spoke like a modern day teen, even though she's older, and she came from a diff time.
Well...the idea for the fic was good though. Nice job.

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