An interesting premise for a story and i've really enjoyed how you've explored the characters. i look forward to reading more.

Well, I have to admit that I was initially skeptical at the Hermione/Lucius aspect of this story, but that skepticism has all but vanished. After all, I really enjoyed 'Soul Searching' by you and am always willing to betray my staunch support of the Snape/Hermione pairing for the sake of an excellent storyline...which this story is building up to, needless to say.

By the looks of it, it has been a good three years since you have last updated this story, but it's so engaging, so unique, SO promising, I am determined to wait you out for an update, or perhaps scour other websites to see if it was continued elsewhere, like 'Soul Searching'. Your profile page does express a certain...um, disillusionment with 'mild' censureship. I desperately hope this is the case; I feel like I'm on a caffeine buzz, my curiosity is so piqued to get more of this story.

Words cannot express it, so I'll just shut up and stop. Begging is not below me, so please don't leave us all hanging from this eye candy. And I wasn't just referring to Lucius Malfoy.

Tofurkey

wow!this story is really misterious..-.-.-i want to see some action!!Lucius is the best wizard in the world,Voldemort is a loser..
ciao
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Oh drat - no more story. Oh, well. I'll just have to wait for the next chapter and hope that I remember enough of the details to know what's going on. I love this - the characterization, descriptions, and plot development are wonderful. In the last paragraph, "Shad", I think, is meant to be 'she had'.

I put this on story alert. Thank you for continuing to write this. :)

Neat story.
Cant wait to see more about the characters and what happened during that raid. Youve manages to really work that night into your story.

Oh I love it, I love it!! I was just browsing the authors I know to find something to pass time but your story is a treasure. I really enjoy reading it. When will you be able to update? I can't wait...

Very interesting and absolutely thrilling. I loved it!! The way you mixed up history, magic and H.P. stories... Impressive!! Thanks a lot for such nice reading!! Your story is getting better with each chapter.

Bah, maybe you like French after all... LOL

I love your idea about the wine. Great, really. And Malfoy inheriting a vineyard is quite good too..

Well, that does explain things a bit.
By the way, I'd love to know what it is about French people. See, I am French, and even if I'm not particularly fussy or touchy with jokes on my country or whatever, why is it that when something is bad, it's always French?? It's really unfair you know?!
Well. It won't prevent me from reading the rest of your story anyway...
Cheers.

Ah, my curiosity has been awaken. Hope you're going to satisfy it quickly... Good chapter, I like the way you write: it is fluid and easy to read. Your Hermione is a bit mysterious, isn't she?

Please more:) What is next to come?

I guess Gandalf is ever present. You do know what I'm talking about right?

Nice reference to the Pied Piper of Hamelin. I like the story so far. Good job.

WOW! i have never read a story like this before! its so captivating! and it is such an original idea, which is hard to come by on a site like this! this story is absolutely wonderful! i have fallen in love with it! i cant wait for more! but my heart broke when i saw the last time you updated! im so worried that you are not continuing this story! i would hate that because i think you are such a talented writer! it would be such a horrible waste if you were to not continue this story! i myself absolutely love to read and write. im better at poems though. i tried to write fanfiction because im in love with it, but i just cant. im not talented in that and it would be so sad to see someone with your ability for writing to not continue a wonderful story like this! please please please continue this story! and if for some reason you are not i would like to hear why because i just cant understand why you would not continue!
please write more as soon as you can!
keep up the talented writing!
~sarah

I see that this has finally been updated with Chapter 6 on the Adult Fan Fiction site. I hope you'll continue it here, too. It's a very intriguing and promising story, and of course excellently written as all your stories are.