Oh. I thought the "Did you like it? / Did you hate it" part was part of the poem.

Very cute! LOVED IT! And thank's for reading my B/a fic! YAY!

Sorry I was an arse earlier. I just get all upset and fished off when I read something when Artemis has a social life in the least. XD

You really are a great author, even if I dont agree with all of your ideas.

BUTLER ROX!Sorry... Your poem is very good, by the way... decriptive... Did I mention that Butler rox?

Nice. I liked it.
--FPP

A javelin? That's uncommon vocabulary, not which I see too often. Even though it's short, it still portrays it's meaning, so don't sweat over it. Not all poems are sonnets, some just don't need to be.
-chow!

Touching!

hi! u r a great author or whatever it is i really like your poem! keep writing...Vampygeniewitch :o)

you try to hard
lol
i liked it alot

Aw w w w! cute!
A very good poem. Stuff like this just doesn't work when people try to make it ryme.
alex

Not bad, Not bad.