Indy wouldn't hurt anybody ever, unless they were the bad guys! This is very sad.

Too much bad stuff is happening to Indy. It's making me sad, but I'll keep reading anyway to see if it gets better.

Holy *! That's awesome...Indy is just SLIGHTLY out of character, but it's fine for this story. I like it a lot.

Sincerely,
(signed)Nathaneal Jacobs

I loved it... I want to read more. MORE!

Great!! keep going. WE need to reed more

Cool story. Keep following your mind. You're pretty creative. Keep going!!

Nice.
I was to be expected,ne? Indy losing to Audrey. Heh, heh.
Well, I'll be off reading to other chapters now. See ya

Holy seven hells!
I wanna know what happens next, does Audrey save Indy? Hope so, that'd be funny!
Update soon!

Wow. Great story so far! Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter!

this is so great
did i mention how great this is?

Now THAT is a good comeback

This is my first Indiana Jones fic that I have read and I hope that they are all as good as yours, because your is fantastic! It is so well written I could see this being a moive. Very nice discription. They do say 'hell' a lot don't they? Oh well. Keep up the good work and update soon this is a great story!
-Amy

scream rape, it sounds like something my friends an i would say! heh heh, had a little laugh at that :-)
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good job! can't wait for more updates, and i love the plot of this story! audrey rocks!

I also like how she doesn't dive into his arms, "Indy, you so handsome and brave! Let's go find a hotel room quick!" I really like this audry chick, and the story.

i like it! go you! keep writing! it's a lot better than most of the stuff i read!